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Sharing A Shelly Sunrise
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Sharing A Shelly Sunrise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Sharing A Shelly Sunrise ~*Marge Tindal*~  I have felt night-angels weep in soft caress on moistured cheek Trickling down to find a smile left by loved ones, here too short a while~ Of all the angels I have known Shelly shined the brightest at the dawn She left upon the rays of sunrise waved goodbye ... through misty eyes Said ... "Watch for me on the morning skies." Then upon jubilant break of morn a Shelly Sunrise in glowing adorn Morning has, in beauty broken love once again ~ brilliantly spoken~ She is so loved and so missed in this heart~ I have touched remember, finding it still knows her sunny smile~ In special birthday remembrance of Michelle Lynette 'Shelly' Barr March 10, 1962 - November 22, 1984 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
Oh....so beautiful, Margie dear...this month of remember tugs my heart...i see the pain with the joy in this...hugs & peace to you, my dear...  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge This brought a tear to my eye of remember because of the name and the feelings that are so like my own. Hugs! |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Marge, this is as beautiful a poem as I've ever seen. I share your tears and wish you God's abundant joy. ((Marge)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
There is so much beauty in a sunrise, the promise of a new begining. I hope the beauty goes a little way to help easing the pain.  Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl this is utterly utterly breathtakingly beautiful I love it I can hear the loving ache within. Truly spectacular writing I love it In this day of remembered strain I hide behind my heart’s true pain The joy that you are there above Is muted by my souls abiding love I miss you more than I can say Your smile stays with me every day If I could take a photo in my soul I’d see that I’m not completely whole I hold you close in the dark of night Then see you in the dawning light Your smile drifts across the skies Which lights my eyes in sweet surprise Your smile lingers in the early sky My heart hears your soft goodbye You’re with me my whole life through And I’ll always remember you Marsha  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
She shines through you, Marge...  |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Very beautifully sad, Marge... I can feel her presence in your poem  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Marge, this is so beautiful. And, I love the picture. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DearestFriends~ Shelly came into my life at the age of eight ... knocked on the front door of my home then plopped herself right down in a corner of my heart~ For fourteen memorable years, she was an everyday presence in my life ... we laughed, we cried, we shared ... she left more than she took in her leaving ... I thank the Lord that Shelly touched my life~ She was the light of morning ... an angel on a twenty-two year tour-of-duty here on earth ... she was soooo worth remembering ... and so I do~ I thank each of you for letting me share a Shelly Sunrise with you ... she would have liked that~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge, this is beautiful.....just so beautiful |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thoughts anchor in this, my friend... on a safe harbor, they anchor secure... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Marge this is simply beautiful and a nice rememberance. floria Floria |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
If this doesn't touch someone's heart, they don't have one... Beautiful, Margie  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is so beautiful, Marge... the love pouring off the page is as warming and lovely as morning ushered in with a glorious sunrise. *S* You didn't just share Shelly's sunrise... you shared her smiles. *S* |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Gorgeous Marge...hugss:sun: ~Victoria |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Lovely thoughts with each sunrise of friendship remembered, Marge *s a beautiful poem of heart Maureen |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Aunti Margie girl this is beautiful it really is, and her beauty is reflected in this. You really are an incredibly talented writer. I do like this one I think it will become a beautiful favourite of mine Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
This is a beautiful and poignant poem, filled with longing. Very well written. It tugged at a familiar string in my heart, and spoke excellent words for it. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I have felt night-angels weep in soft caress on moistured cheek Trickling down to find a smile left by loved ones, here too short a while~ ============================== you pen overflows with love...your hold more muses in your heart than most can ever tap into... beautiful tribute Margie-gal. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sweet Friends~ On a yesterday-of-remembering ... memories of Shelly fell so softly into my heart ... we planted a rose bush in the yard ... and I've dedicated it to the eternal blooming of her little spirit. Thank you all from the bottom of my heart for the gentleness of your comments~ May you each find a Shelly Sunrise to greet your dawn~ Love n' hugs~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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