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Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-03-09 09:35 AM

I cast thee not away from me
my heart wilt surely fail
I live for you a knight to be
in search of holy grail

In thine own heart and soul I find
my yearn within thy breast
For with true love I wilt recline
as thee art truly best

Wilt thee not know tis mine you take
into the wane of light
To dine and sup fruits of wine to slake
and share one sure delight

Thy charm and touch do bring to heart
a beat to fuel this fire
Wilt thee not shirk from warmth of arm
for thee most strong desire

Upon the bed of soft and white
thy charms I will explore
till ‘pon the strike of dawn is right
thy lips doth whisper ....more!

[This message has been edited by Magnus (03-09-2002 09:43 AM).]

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

1 posted 2002-03-09 09:38 AM

Wow these words are wonderful Magnus.

"To dine and sup fruits of wine to slake
and share one sure delight'
and I just love the last verse, very romantic for your "lady" wonderful. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-03-09 09:39 AM

Upon the bed of soft and white
thy charms I will explore
till ‘pon the strike of dawn is right
thy lips doth whisper ....more!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
YES!! Ah Barry, this wench is loving every one of these!
Wonderful, and they must be most diffult to do.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Sometimes all you really wish for...
is someone to wish for you.~

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

3 posted 2002-03-09 09:40 AM

Magnus darling boy I utterly utterly love this one, an absolutely excellent poem from you. I’ve said before I don’t know how you keep excelling yourself time after time. This is absolutely top notch writing. Wonderful really really wonderful writing

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

4 posted 2002-03-09 09:44 AM

This one said it all...

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2002-03-09 10:02 AM

Floria, thank you...yes, I like the last
verse too....is my favorite...

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2002-03-09 10:03 AM

Awwww Nancy, you are such a hopeless
romantic wench, art thee not??

Glad you enjoyed....thank you!!

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2002-03-09 10:04 AM

Mushy,  Mushy,  quite so smushy...
so utterly so...  Written words from only
our Mushy,  the feelings that do flow....

Thanx Mushy...

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2002-03-09 10:06 AM

KJ

The all is said
for is thee lore
I rest my head
and give thee more.

Thanx Karilea...

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2002-03-09 03:18 PM

YAY!!! I agree, these must be so difficult to write, but you always write them so wonderfully and share the most loveliest visions of your heart! (big huggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Dee
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since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

10 posted 2002-03-09 09:43 PM

"thy lips doth whisper ....more!"

and they do.....

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

11 posted 2002-03-09 09:52 PM

Noah, my fellow romantice friend...thank
you...glad you enjoyed...

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

12 posted 2002-03-09 09:54 PM

Dee...

Into the late of night
a poet pens words in light
as softly whipered is the choice
of yet another lovely voice...

YES...more....

Thank You....

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

13 posted 2002-03-09 09:59 PM

You really do have a way with those romantic poems, Barry.

Thy charm and touch do bring to heart
a beat to fuel this fire

this one is absolutely beautiful!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

14 posted 2002-03-09 10:09 PM

Lyra....(modesty overcoming me)....I do
try...and I do enjoy writing this, it is
very challenging to me...

Thine eyes do absorb the write
of pen upon touch of line
As thee know I leave to fight
as leaves do fall from vine.

For in the winter's bleak night
my steed does wait to ride
And as I leave thee in the light
my tears in struggle hide.

Thank You Lyra....I enjoy your comments...

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

15 posted 2002-03-09 10:35 PM

Well versed...James

Keith Morgan
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since 2001-10-29

Posts 114
Md

16 posted 2002-03-09 10:36 PM

Very impressive writing. Your words of beauty are expressed so well. I appreciate the sharing of great poetry.

Write from the soul and the words will flow

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