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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-03-08 11:42 PM


She's My Favorite Waitress Too

She's got everything I need.
All the necessary frills.
Coffee to awaken my day.
Bacon and eggs to fill my world.
She's sweet as honey
and has a fantastic personality.
She brightens up my morning the way
she says "good morning" so pleasantly.
And that waitress outfit she wears
shows off her gorgeous legs beautifully
for admiring customers just like me.
I confess I only look a little every now and than
because she's married and I'm in love with Jin
and if she caught me checking out Chung
she'd probably hit me on the chin.

JamesLee
Maarch08
2002
I have two favorite waitresses now.
Tina at the Yum Yum Tree and Chung
at Anna Millers.


© Copyright 2002 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-08 11:48 PM


tip well my friend...tip well
this is great, I was a waitress for a few years, loved the work, and the tips

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2 posted 2002-03-08 11:56 PM


You better watch it..a woman always knows when her guy is checking out another woman..she can see the look in his eyes..she knows before you do who you are going to look at..i always did  

             ~Vic

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3 posted 2002-03-09 12:06 PM




(sigh) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may you forever offer them tips to show how much they mean to you! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

strbbux
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4 posted 2002-03-09 09:32 AM


HAHAHA James I love this and you are a hoot. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Duncan
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5 posted 2002-03-09 09:42 AM


If ya can't give her paradise...tip well!  There is something about them, huh?
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6 posted 2002-03-09 09:53 AM


James darling boy I utterly utterly love this one, an absolutely excellent poem from you. Well I’m sure she appreciates you too, just make sure you tip well, and she’ll appreciate that too.

Wonderful writing absolutely wonderful


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


hoot_owl_rn
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7 posted 2002-03-09 10:55 AM


Bet you're a big tipper too
Poet deVine
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8 posted 2002-03-09 11:38 AM


I enjoyed this!!! Waitressing is a hard job so it's nice to know you appreciate them. I hope you print a copy of this and share it with them!
Enchantress
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9 posted 2002-03-09 12:15 PM


Really cute James!  You must take this in and show it to your favourite waitresses.
Jin knows where your eyes are looking every second....it's a trait we women are born with! Ha!
Good write...enjoyed with a smile!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Sometimes all you really wish for...
     is someone to wish for you.~

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2002-03-09 12:28 PM


James,
Even if you didn't check her out Jin would have something to say. Enjoyed the read.

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Gaia
11 posted 2002-03-09 12:34 PM


LOL, keep your chin up, James.
   And another tip?
       Tip well.

Decaflame
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12 posted 2002-03-09 05:35 PM



Tip very, Very well...

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