quickly lost in a swirl of confussion

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Open Poetry #19

quickly lost in a swirl of confussion

Little_White_Flowers
Junior Member

since 2002-01-27

Posts 23

0 posted 2002-03-08 10:15 PM

this swirl surrounds me fills my mind
i cant seem to keep up with time.
You are gone in this swirl of maddness
bringing me a world of complete sadness.
I walk around like nothing is wrong
it might break me down erelong.
inside i wither inside i die
and all i can seem to ask is why.
Why am i so in love with you
and yet how i can feel so utterly blue.
the stars shine bright the moon beems low
this love i have for you brings me sweet woe.
I see you in the heavens i see you in my dreams
i want to see your skin glint off the warm sunbeems
We are so far apart but certinly not in heart
although i cant see you, smell you, kiss you, or touch you, my love does not part.
Keep this song this song of confusion
keep it where there it may not ruin.

~~Little~~White~~Flowers~~

jennirey
Member

since 2002-01-24

Posts 198
North Richland HillsTx

1 posted 2002-03-08 10:28 PM

Welcome to passions and (((hugs))) to you... You've come to the *write* place to cast away your woes...

Jen

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-03-08 10:28 PM

(sigh) This is soooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I can understand the confusion you feel, but I know deep down when both of you confess your love, peace will finally seep into your heart and have you comforted in true love forever! (big huggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

EroseGrover
Junior Member

since 2000-07-09

Posts 44
SD,CA 92126

3 posted 2002-03-08 10:41 PM

Seems like you need to find out what it is your so confussed about nice poem.

ShadowRider
Senior Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 1038
USA

4 posted 2002-03-09 04:06 PM

Is it the deep want that causes the confusion?: the magnum urge
to be with, share, and grow?
Not getting all that we want could be confusing, yes....
but by just being loved
we are blessed.
tSR

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