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Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

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Hurricane Alley

0 posted 2002-03-08 09:22 PM

Where the heart is cliché’s phrase
I seek it still with him there
hidden behind the façade of friend
in expressions too tender to share

His heart I have carried within my own
little does he know it, I fear
fly gentle spirit, words of love
from my heart to my lover’s ear.

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

1 posted 2002-03-08 09:26 PM

Gentle spirit, like little cupid. take the message to him. very nice. very very nice Poet. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-03-08 09:28 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is such a beautiful love poem, sweet friend, I believe that words of love can never be cliches because they are what brings lovers together and are naturally felt by the desires of ones heart! (sigh) May true loves words forever melt your heart and fill you with joy, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

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On A Journey To The Unknown

3 posted 2002-03-08 09:37 PM

I like this, Sharon. This is a lovely little love poem.

jennirey
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since 2002-01-24

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North Richland HillsTx

4 posted 2002-03-08 09:44 PM

Very pretty.. hope that you get your wish come true..

Hugs

Jen

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

5 posted 2002-03-08 09:54 PM

This has a great flow and sentiment to it. I do hope that he hears

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

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By the sea

6 posted 2002-03-08 10:26 PM

This is very pretty, Sharon. A nice thought!

Michael

Stars will shine when I am gone
Earth will spin on as before
Gulls still race along the shore
Morning star, still kiss the dawn

~ M. Auguste

Balladeer

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7 posted 2002-03-08 10:53 PM

You want gentle spirit to stick it in his ear??

I have no shame...making fun of a very well-written and romantic piece...I really do like it, deVine one

hoot_owl_rn
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Glen Hope, PA USA

8 posted 2002-03-09 11:01 AM

absolutely DeVine

Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

9 posted 2002-03-09 11:10 AM

Thank you all. I appreciate your comments as this blocked poet struggles (this poem was from a challenge thread a year ago!).

Sigh

Accordionmaid
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10 posted 2002-03-09 12:27 PM

I like it! Makes me think of some times I felt like that....

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

11 posted 2002-03-09 12:31 PM

deVine One,
Simply lovely, and as mike said well done.

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