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Contabo
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0 posted 2002-03-08 05:26 PM


Tears


When winter's thaw
ushers in the warmth
of spring
bringing the season's
annual downpour of emotions….
that life might be extended
by washing the dust
from my soul.

Contabo

[This message has been edited by Contabo (03-08-2002 05:49 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Contabo Monami - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-08 05:42 PM




WOW!!! Ooohhhhhh...I love it, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always shine with such wonderful imagery, this one roared with thunder and flashed with poetic lightning! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Contabo, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-03-08 07:26 PM


yes I always feel better after a good cry, but never penned it so beauifully

Write what you feel, feel what you wrtie.


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3 posted 2002-03-08 09:49 PM


Very nicely done, Contabo.  Cleansing and refreshing tears can be quite healing and rejuvenating.
Honeybee
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4 posted 2002-03-08 10:01 PM



Excellent use of a metaphor, very well said!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Tim
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5 posted 2002-03-09 12:53 PM


nicely written, enjoyed your poem.
Tiersdin
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6 posted 2002-03-09 12:57 PM


Nicely done, very gentle...

*smiles*

~Tier

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