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Carolina
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0 posted 2002-03-08 10:59 AM


As this Princess waits for her fairytale life to start......

A FOREVER LOVE STORY

She sat alone night and day
Waiting for her Prince to sweep her away
The days grew long and the nights were cold
She longed for his strong body to hold.

This princess knew he'd come for her soon
To rescue her from sadness and gloom
Her dreams were of him and the day he'd come
Loneliness and pain he'll deliver her from.

He arrived at sunrise, brighter than the sun
Softly his fingers through her hair did run
She gazed in his eyes and saw to his heart,
And knew at that moment they'd never part.

He held her tight as he mounted his horse
Gave her a kiss as he showed no remorse.
They rode into the forest, far away to be alone
To start a new life, a life of their own.

Days turned to months, months into years
Happiness and love replaced her tears
He protected her from all the hurt of the world
His love and devotion to her he unfurled.

Their love never died, but eventually they did
Buried together by their beautiful kids.
Their children bore children and as they got old
To their children's children the love story was told.

They arrive at sunrise to brighten they day
Showering love to the world along their way.
The stars twinkle at night to show them the course
As he kisses his Princess and they mount his horse.

Live today as if it's your last.  Love today as if it's your first.   Lisa

© Copyright 2002 Lisa - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-08 01:55 PM


A lovely fairy tale romance! Now, where did that Prince of mine ride off to? And he took our only horse! LOL. I enjoyed the tale.
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2 posted 2002-03-08 02:23 PM


This is beautiful, Carolina. *S* I enjoyed it very much.
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(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Carolina, this is one of the most beautiful, sensitive love poems I've ever read, this made me cry just thinking about the sweet eternal gift of love they will forveer share and their children will grow and share it too! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, I'm adding this to my library because its so so outstanding, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Carolina, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


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4 posted 2002-03-08 03:39 PM


Ah, that is where my Prince got too nice story.

~* Without deep reflection one knows from daily life that one exists for other people ." *~

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5 posted 2002-03-08 04:02 PM


I do love this!!!!!!!!!

This is such a beautiful poetic story....

Very much enjoyed...Thank You!!

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6 posted 2002-03-08 04:09 PM


Carolina,
Amen, enjoyed.

Carolina
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7 posted 2002-03-08 04:16 PM


Thank you, everyone.  I guess we all spend our lives waiting for our Prince and Princess.  Sometimes we find them, sometimes we don't.  I'm glad you enjoyed this.  

Live today as if it's your last.  Love today as if it's your first.   Lisa

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