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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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the rain people are funny voiced when they talk at the windows we have waved at them on occasion but they ignore us and pretend they don't see our love hand touches there under the table and when we walk outside under the damp eye sky they run to us as children and hug our skin legs wanting to go where we go and find some window or some tree with slick leaves so they can talk about us again with their funny voices. ©Dark |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkStranger~ Oh my ... how I love the feel of this piece~ I have heard the funny voiced rain~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
In case you don't like him I will mention this is meant as a compliment,,,lol.. This poem has a Sandburg quality about it. Something in the feel of it. Great stuff.  JThere is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Marge, thank you so much my friend Jamie, you flatter me nicely and yes I do like him thank you much |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
D, I love the rain, and this is one of the neatest poems about rain I have ever read, and I enjoyed it very much |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger, A very good write, enjoyed |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
SEA, bless you, glad you enjoyed it...the rain is a lover you know.. Seymour, thank you my friend |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS The sound of rain has many voices...I like this one of yours. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I always love the gorgeous visions and music you create with your words, the rain hums in your heart! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is outstanding! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms martie, thank you babe...I appreiate you Noah...thank you amigo....glad you came by |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
this is cool.... I like this ...talking rain with funny voices : ) |
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