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Saunni
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0 posted 2002-03-08 04:52 AM




Tonight The Angels Weep

She knows that the night should surely be still
She's torn between natures rain and her own pouring rain
There's just something about it's slow ride down her window
That drives the very inside of her insane...

Transparent to the eyes but not to the soul
Is the sweet presence of all good carrying wings
For, angels surround her in the midst of her sorrow
Here to guide her for reality is about to sing...

In her long stare she finds the promise he'd always be here
She's so caught up in it all heart deep
This night goes out to the girl face to face with that glass
So, tonight, for her, the angels weep...

For, they know not a tear will race from her eyes at all
It's within that they'll fall like the waters outside
They know she's wondering why the winds ever changed
So, tonight, the angels weep for another part of her to die...

All she's ever asked God for he seemed to answer with him
That mans heart gave her reason and strength to grow
He was clearly the result of a miracle God placed before her
Tonight, the angels weep for the part if him that let her go...

Tonight, she swallows fear yet once again
And, the angels weep for what may have been
She's thankful the angels stayed by her side
She just wonders if he's felt the tears she couldn't cry...

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

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2 posted 2002-03-08 08:28 AM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Saunni, this is so very sad, my heart cries out to her and I hope with all my heart that he can relate to her tears and understand how she feels and she needs him close to guide her with the angels! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, you are a true angel of words, we all love you so much, my heart goes out to everyone who has this kind of pain in their hearts! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Saunni, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-03-08 08:29 AM


Saunni~
Your title pulled me in ...
the thoughts cascade in gentle remembering~

Thank you, poetess~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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4 posted 2002-03-08 02:12 PM


I'm sure that he has my friend. . .

from your heart. . .as always. . .

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5 posted 2002-03-08 02:35 PM


This flows so gently and easily, soft as a tear rolling silently down a cheek pressed to one memory pane (pain) of Life. Isn't it comforting to know you can turn your head to your window full of sunshine and rainbows?  
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