Rivals (repost for march 8th, second year anniversary for a lesson taught.)

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Rivals (repost for march 8th, second year anniversary for a lesson taught.)

Saxoness

Senior Member

since 1999-07-18

Posts 1102
Texas

0 posted 2002-03-08 01:12 AM

In the dark
I see your face...
it rivals the
night.

The memories are
daggers
borring into me
and I cannot
stop it.

You always find
me
No matter where
I go.

Your eyes haunt me
caress me
shame me
and I cannot
look away.

I can feel you
on my
skin,
full of heat.

Lingering gazes
burn me
with only a
memory.

Look away from me!

I want to see
the moon
again.

I want to
sleep
without you
in my dreams.

In the dark
I see your face...
it rivals the
night.

"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

amigo
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 520
the earth school

1 posted 2002-03-08 11:37 AM

In the dark
I see your face...
it rivals the
night.
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words so full of pain here, Angela...i liked your choice of words here..i hope you do have a sleep without the haunting dreams, my friend...

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2002-03-08 02:07 PM

a lesson taught yes. . . but, a lesson learned??

well done here. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Dulcinea
Senior Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
IN

3 posted 2002-03-08 09:25 PM

Some of the most profound lessons learned are those taught through pain, very well said!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-03-08 09:44 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Angela, this is so very sad, my heart goes out to you and I hope now you have found true love that overshadows those sad memories and makes you want to dream of him at night! (sigh) This is sad but wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Angela, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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