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Given To Fly - A Fairytale
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Given To Fly - A Fairytale |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada 
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 ~* Given To Fly *~ A Fairytale ~*~ For Jake ~*~ © Mysteria 07/03/2001 ~* Play Moongate by Secret Garden *~ I came across a a little gaffer exploring in the woods, doing what little boys do best, things I never quite understood. He dug for some worms, then he caught a dandy ladybug, then suddenly he let it go with the cutest little shrug. In one back pocket, he kept his collector’s jar real handy, In the other was a good supply of Grandma’s peppermint candy. What a sight he was, both knees all covered with mud and dirt, I could see he was having fun, this adorable little squirt. He had a bag he lugged along with so many special leaves. He was about to do something ‘cause he pushed back his sleeves. I hid behind a tree, as he carefully took a look around, and I was ever so careful not to make a sound. He brought out the jar from his pocket but I couldn’t see, so carefully I crept closer hoping he wouldn't see me. He was talking to something he had in that sealer jar, but I couldn’t see what was in it he was just too far. I moved a little closer, and held my breath at what I saw, inside his jar was a tiny fairy; I just stood there in complete awe. He was telling her he was sorry for keeping her so long, and he hoped he had fixed her wing, and now it was really strong. He told her to fly away but to please look for him some day. He would love to play with her again, and the other fae. She thanked him for his kindness, and she shed a tiny tear, Kissing him on the cheek, she said, “Goodbye Jake my dear.” She was so very tiny but I saw her flying away, I heard her say as she waved, “I’ll visit you one fine day.” I stood there in amazement, could all this be true? Did I really see a fairy bid a little boy adieu? I came from behind the tree and startled Jake a bit, not as much as what I saw shocked me I must admit. He had tears running down his cheeks, and was so very sad. I tried to console him and instill in him what he had. I said, “Jake, I don’t think too many boys have fairies for a friend.” I could see a smile appearing, and I knew his heart was on the mend. I asked him, “ How did you happen to befriend a little fairy?” He said, “Well, I found her over there in that blackberry.” “I got her out, took her home, and gave her Grandma’s chicken soup, I made her a little matchbox bed, and in there she did recoup. One day, she jumped out of the box and then began to fly, I cried, but no one saw, 'cause I knew it was time for our goodbye.” I told him he was a special little boy to be so very kind, And that he and the fairy’s hearts were now surely intertwined. He hugged me and thanked me for being there today, But he had to get home to his Grandma, so he went on his way. I look for Jake and the little fairy in the forest to this very day, hoping to rekindle the magic in my heart that never goes away. For if you believe in fairies and the magic that they bring, your soul will be full of love, and your heart will always sing.  Graphic: Given To Fly - James Browne http://www.jamesbrowne.net/gallery/ Music: Moongate by Secret Garden (my favorite) http://music.21youth.com/en/secret/default.htm ~* Without deep reflection one knows from daily life that one exists for other people ." *~ Einstein [This message has been edited by Mysteria (03-08-2002 03:46 AM).] |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
A comforting tale...perfect for the night. |
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Midnight Writer Junior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 28Texas |
Sharon, this is simply lovely! "No matter how great you are, you'll never be greater than yourself." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Honestly, Sharon, this is precious! I enjoyed reading it...to myself.  I do have a few wee little friends that might enjoy this, especially if I give them a small bottle with some leaves, and then wave my magic wand......Thanks for the smiles and fantasy fun. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
what a beautiful treasure Sharon. Thanks for sharing this! On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Ah ... Sharon, what a delightful and enchanting read! Beautifully woven, and tugs at the heart with the lovely imagery of the scene. Much enjoyed!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This makes me soooo very happy. It's absolutely wonderful, Sharon. I've forwarded the URL to my daughter so that she and Jake can read this great piece together... and.. Just because I'm so very proud of my wonderful munchkin, I'll give you all a glimpse of him - Um.. Cassandra made him do it...      THANK YOU SHARON YOU'RE A VERY SPECIAL AND DEAR FRIEND |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I believe in faeries with all my heart and dream ever so much of finding one and befriending one! (smiles) Your words always make me smile and dream of the most gorgeous things, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
What a wonderful gift.... you do this so well...the theme, the poetry, and the polished presentation. Perfect Pic and song to accompany. Lovely write and intention Sharon.. and Nan those pics are adorable. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sharon, this is so touching, what a wonderful gift and Nan, your little man is too cute I LOVED this |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon, Sheer delight, You have pushed the button of my favorate think. And all I can offer is a smile and a wink. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I told him he was a special little boy to be so very kind, You're pretty special yourself, lady. *S* I hope Jake enjoys this as much as I did. And Nan... those pictures are great!!! *G* |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
simply lovely, Sharon, your words & pics always takes me to a wonderful place..thank you my friend... and Nan, your munchkin is truly wonderful... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I am glad you enjoyed this one for Jake. I do these quite quickly actually but not correctly LOL. My audience is usually a 4 year old, and until she can correct me I get away with it.  I like t see a picture and just run away with it! My granddaughter is only 4 this July and loves to rhyme words, and we shoot them out loud while we are walking, like ... "MAT", she says, "CAT", and then...I say, "Is there somethere there on that mat? I believe it is the neighbour's cat! That kind of thing, then it's her turn. I am sure no Kit or Balladeer, but I love rhymes. Oh dear, rambling, but thank you all muches.p.s. I don't like being #13 on comments, anyone else feel that way, lol ~* Without deep reflection one knows from daily life that one exists for other people ." *~ Einstein [This message has been edited by Mysteria (03-08-2002 02:18 PM).] |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Thank you so much for the poem. It made me feel so very happy. I believe in fairies and I hope to find one someday.~jake Thank you that was so absolutely delightfully magical. ~sandy~daughter of nan |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sharon, At first....I thought this was such a long poem....Once I started...I didn't want it to end...Such beauty...such a vision....Simply Awesome!!!! |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
May I borrow this to share with a grandchild or two? If nothing else, it will show them that a Mysteria believes in the faes, as should we all, when we want a smile. Well done, Mysteria! I would seriously think of sharing this one beyond the blue walls. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sharon..This is delightful!! |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Geesh - Here I was figuring that I'd have to loan Sandra and Jake an alias to comment, because she's not registered... But NO... What do they do??.. They just click on "Reply"... (at their house).. Et Voila... Guess what - There was my name with cookies intact - They've got it under control... I guess I've posted from there once or twice, eh??? I think you made my team a little happy today, Sharon... Thank you again..  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Sandy and Jake ~ How wonderful for you to get in here and say you liked it. Jake, I saw pictures of you from your Grandma, and I thought that boy looked like you (the blonde hair I guess), and what your Grandma told me of you, I just knew you had the heart that would let a fairy free - so glad you liked it Jake. Sandy, we have lots to talk about when I come for I too believe in the never ending circle and the triads of knowledge, so we shall talk about how you see them, it's simple once you know how Thanks again for taking the time to comment on it, I truly do appreciate it.Magnus ~ We all need a good fairytale once in awhile, I am so glad you enjoyed this one. Soleil Noir ~ Thank you for that comment, nothing could have warmed my heart more than anyone thinking it was even good enough for sharing beyond these pages, and to share mine with your grandchildren makes me Thank you.Martie ~ I am thrilled you read it, thank you. Nan ~ The apple never falls far from the tree, so where there is a will there is a way! Again, thanks to everyone for giving me the courage to post more of my stories, I love doing these, and hope you will enjoy them. ~* Without deep reflection one knows from daily life that one exists for other people ." *~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Sharon! I am playing catch up tonight with my reading and just came across this wonderful write now. I am so pleased I didn't miss it! Faeries? Why yes! I have them living at the bottom of my garden! Thank you for this treasure sweet poetess. *The faeries also thank you for believing* ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Sometimes all you really wish for... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Wonderful, wonderful Mysteria. Love the way you've woven the language to creat grand images. This is so hypnotizing with its fantasy power! So glad I didn't miss it. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I love this tale! Wonderful! Thanks for the smiles it brought. |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
Sharon, I like the web you weave .... The vivid images you portray. I can see the eyes of little ones wide open listening in awe at the ending. You are one loving and talented lady.. Maggie |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Mysteria, I have a six year old grandson who looks just like that little boy in the picture. And what a wonderful poem, full of a little boys loves, floria Floria |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Hi y'all (is that right) LOL, well I am always doing fairytales for little girls as I have one granddaughter almost 4 and another learing about her surroundings of 4 months. I've saved them to make a little book sooner or later. I am glad you like them I have done them for every age, as this book will be given to them when they are over 18 to let them know that fairytales are for a lifetime not just for children. You can make a fairytale out of anything, try it! Thanks for your lovely comments. The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
...and I'm glad you do... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
awww sharon this is simply beautiful...love it!!! Charisma |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Sharon You weaved such a magical picture with your words and I couldn't help but be swept away. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ladies, so glad you enjoyed the tale, thank you. |
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