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Marge Tindal
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Swirling Sisterly Memories
~*Marge Tindal*~

~*~
Sisterly
memories swirl
Twirling you upon
the heartstrings
of my heart
Dancing
memories of when
you were here within
my reach and we laughed
Fond embrace of happy times
Missing precious moments of your
laughter, the trinkets in a box, the
letters with one page and that darned
always extra line before you figured out
that you'd said all there was to say then
tucked it in an envelope to post it to me
Treasured now they are,the extra lines
a birthday reminder of the smiles you
left me to find on days such as this
Happy Birthday, sister Shari~
I miss you so much


*In memory of Shari Cowart Ricker
March 8, 1944 - October 7, 1999




~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (03-08-2002 12:47 AM).]

© Copyright 2002 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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marge!!!!!!!



YOU are such a beautiful person and this is such a beautiful treasure..... it is a drop of a tear of art ... it is LOVE in sisterly poetry exquisitely designed.....

marge..... i love this!!!!! and you!!!
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2 posted 03-08-2002 12:21 AM       View Profile for Marsha   Email Marsha   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marsha's Home Page   View IP for Marsha

Magie darling sister of my heart Oh MY STARS Iím utterly utterly in awe of you, how do you do this so well? You truly are a mistress at these pure treasures darling heart, Iím really impressed.

Youíve written this so well, this really is such a beautiful piece of art darling heart. Utterly utterly I love it.

Really beautiful writing, beautiful presentation, outstanding, truly outstanding. SHE would be so proud of you Margie girl, they all would,  

I wub you

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

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Marge,
You always amase me. Love
Kit McCallum
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4 posted 03-08-2002 08:03 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Oh Marge ... what a beautiful tribute to your sister. The love flows through these lines of sweet remembrances and keepsakes. A treasure of treasures .... beautiful sentiments and superb swirling format, my friend.

Best wishes and hugs,
/Kit
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Perfect Margie ... just perfect...
youve given her a lovely tribute of heart.
Heart-hugs to you on this day of remembrance.
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this made me cry Marge.... you know my heart is with you
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really very, very well done, marge, poem, image, all.

jwesley
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a birthday reminder of the smiles you
left me to find on days such as this

This is such a beautiful tribute... not just to Shari, but to the love you shared. May you find many smiles, dear lady. *S*
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Just Perfect, Margie dear...so tender and soft...just perfect is all i can say...thank you for sharing this gem...
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Beautifully written Marge dear.. hugss
i have one sister who died and thank God i have one still here..lovely words you have written...hugss

           ~Victoria
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I see more in this than even you wanted to release, but then, that is what adopted sisters are for, right, White Feather?  Right....

Thank you for sharing your thoughts, Marge..always deep, always meaningful, always full of your wisdom...and heart...

Bill is one lucky man...
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Marge this is so very touching, It was nice reading this with my coffee early this morning. A simply beautiful loving poem of affection and I love the style that you took the time to create. floria

Floria

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But die with all their music in them"
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Marge:  This is such a special and tender poem, for someone precious to you.  It is a treasure!

Betty Lou Hebert

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Marge, this in wonderful. My sister is my very best friend. And I think sisters are always very, very special.

((Marge))
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Marge

Your heart sure writes well!  What wonderful memories you have.  Thank you for sharing them. Hugs!
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Marge, anyone can see this came straight from your heart and what a beautiful tribute to your sister!  
...thinking of my own sister today.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Sometimes all you really wish for...
     is someone to wish for you.~

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Auntie Margie girl, this is such a beauteous tribute to your sister, I know what sisters mean to each other, you should see the way I treat mine.

This is really excellent writing and so creative, I doubt if I could ever do that. Still I donít need to I can gaze at yours and say there is beauty. This is really excellent

Oh I hear you like these senyru things so Iím going to attempt one

Sisters love each other
In sisterly love they shine
This is true beauty


How did I do?


Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy


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at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

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Oh Marge, this is a beautiful tribute to your sister. Thank you for sharing it.
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Marge, lots of hugs comming your way.

Dee

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Hope you sent this to your sister as a Passions Card, Marge.
Exquisite, unequivalent to any other
full of Sisterly love.
tSR :0
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Beautifully and tenderly expressed, Marge. (((HUGS)))
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DearestFriends~
So very deeply you each reach me with your tenderly expressed comments~
Losing someone we love is an ache that never goes away ...
Being able to share my feelings with you helps me to better bear the loss~

Don't let the sun set without telling someone you love them ... for you never know when the sun may not rise again with that person still in your life~

God bless you all for holding and sharing a piece of my heart~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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You ar a wonderful beautiful lady Marge, you are precious and share your love many ways. I am grateful to be able to read your beautiful and loving heart inside your poetry.

May God bless you and may your talent always shine with love and be treasured by many who recognize themselves in your words.

((hugs))
Charisma
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Charisma~
Late in thanking you ..... but it's that time again when the 'sisterly-swirls' turn me around in sweetest recall~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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