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Mark Coburn
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0 posted 2002-03-07 11:59 PM



fall of 96....tai chi lonliness...

Pull right on out
into the stream
deflecting blows
grasp swallows tail
redirecting forces and energy
steady...like movement of Sun.

Walking most everywhere
chalk in hand
words they wrote
are washed away
yet never forgotten.........Mark

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1 posted 2002-03-08 01:45 AM


I like this, but I'm wanting to read more.  Very good.
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2 posted 2002-03-08 09:32 PM


"Walking most everywhere
chalk in hand
words they wrote
are washed away
yet never forgotten"

I like this VERY much

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3 posted 2002-03-08 09:35 PM




(smiles) Ooohhhhhhhh...I love this a lot too, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-03-09 12:02 PM


And where will you be on April 6, T'ai Chi and Qi Gong World Healing Day? I enjoyed this, even though I haven't a clue as to your '96 reference.
"redirecting forces and energy
steady...like movement of Sun."
Yes, this movement feels good.


Mark Coburn
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5 posted 2002-03-09 01:32 AM


Thanx everyone ....I wrote this in 1996.....
totally emersed in yang style tai chi.......
yeah me and Lucy would walk all over d.c.
in love and on an immense adventure leaving our words and thoughts upon the cities pavements back in 79'..............mark

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