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Enotneicna
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0 posted 2002-03-07 10:03 PM


Moon's silver fire
Chill
Drawn around the night like a cloak
Shrouding with colorless light
Transforms reality to a photographic negative.

White fire burns in your eyes
As chill as the dark scape that is your domain
Yet
Kindles a fire in my blood
Hot as the golden orb that rules my world of color and light

Your gaze holds me as surly as if
I were bound in chains
My will becomes your will
I am yours body and soul.

Enotneicna
SLR
1-28-02

Words are my medicine.
Read and live and love and heal!



© Copyright 2002 Sharon Lee Wilcox (Enotneicna) - All Rights Reserved
jwesley
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1 posted 2002-03-07 10:07 PM


Ah, and only a fool would turn away, my friend.  Hope you passed this to him...


jwesley

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2 posted 2002-03-07 10:10 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love the imagery you always put in your words, this is a true dreamscape of true loves beginning! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may your body and soul froever sing with the songs of pure love! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Enotneicna
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3 posted 2002-03-07 11:34 PM


jwesley,
Yes I did pass this to him and his response was overwhelming........

many blessings
Eno
Noah,
you are a sweetheart my friend......I have been very blessed with love's truest form.  My Halfside stands beside me always with gentle pride and loving words, and I wish everyone could find what I have.

many blessings
Eno

Words are my medicine.
Read and live and love and heal!



doreen peri
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4 posted 2002-03-08 12:05 PM


oh what a feeling you have expressed.... THIS, my friend is Love indeed!!!

wonderful thoughts....!! beautiful writing!

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2002-03-08 01:27 AM


"Your gaze holds me surly
as if I were bound in chains"....James

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6 posted 2002-03-08 01:36 AM


This is good.  
Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2002-03-13 02:58 PM


Enotneicna~

My friend ... this is BEAUTIFUL~

'Your gaze holds me as surly as if
I were bound in chains
My will becomes your will
I am yours body and soul.'


I feel Spirits Walking all over your heart~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Victoria
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8 posted 2002-03-13 03:17 PM


love this..nicely penned..hope to read more from you.. hugss

             ~Vic

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-- James Joyce


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Deep in the heart
9 posted 2002-03-13 03:21 PM


Sounds like sweet surrender to me.
~*~
I surrender dear
you own all I have to give
it was always yours

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Sunshine
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10 posted 2002-04-04 02:58 PM



How wonderful to see inspiration, inspire...

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