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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2002-03-07 09:07 PM



To think at times in raw intelligence: Defense
And quickly to dismiss the mere irrelevance: No Sense
To wonder of the outcome of the truth: Significance
To wander in the crowd of thoughts aloof: Omnipotence

And realize that being me is hard enough: Unconventional
So difficult to figure out this selfish stuff: One-dimensional
Attempting to bring betterment along: Mutuality
To address the everlasting song: Immortality

Finding what does matter after all: Successfully
Sharing of these thoughts so beautiful: So Blissfully
To accept the sweet more earnestly: Reposed
To give up the veil that might cover me: Exposed

Copyright Kkh 3/7/02

© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-07 09:18 PM



I do so enjoy the way you write...

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2 posted 2002-03-07 09:19 PM


I enjoyed the way that you put this all
together....with the statement and then
the defining word...YES,  I do agree...
exposed sums it all right up..

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3 posted 2002-03-07 09:37 PM




(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...I just love the way you write, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always make me smile! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, such expression and cadence is always exposed from your heart! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

jwesley
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4 posted 2002-03-07 09:41 PM


Made a lot of sense to me TD.  I think you did this very well and completely.  Enjoyed mucho.

jwesley

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5 posted 2002-03-08 01:12 AM


I like this.  Very well done.
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