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Ladyhawke Member
since 2001-09-01
Posts 86 |
This may be kind of simple...but tell me what you think.Suggestions are welcome. Breathe, Hold. Breathe, Hold. I have love; 'Tis here, you see. I have love Inside of me. Breathe, Hold. Breathe, Hold. I have love Enough to give. Take this love; Let me live. Breathe, Hold. Breathe, Hold. I have love With no direction; Here's my love For your inspection. Breathe, Hold. Breathe, Hold. I have love. I can give it to you. I ask nothing back. It is true. Breathe, Hold. Breathe, Hold. I have love; Take it from me! I ask no payment! It is free! Breathe, Hold. Breathe, Hold. Take my love! Take it away! I cannot keep it One more day! Breathe. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Good gosh gal, you never let me exhale!!!! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Been awhile since I've seen "Ladyhawke" in here, for whatever reason and I really like this, my friend. I have an old one sorta similar but not near as good...will try and find it. Really would like to see more...of you. jwesley [This message has been edited by jwesley (03-07-2002 08:56 PM).] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Simple and sweet...breathless. ThisDiamond |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Gosh....giving birth???? Like this style...I do it occasionally and can be very powerful though simple.. I really don't think you could have done much different, do believe it is just fine as is... |
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Ladyhawke Member
since 2001-09-01
Posts 86 |
Magnus, that was funny! Giving birth was the farthest thing from my mind, but I can see where that came from. Sunshine, I'm sorry. I have a habit of holding my breath unconsciously. jwesley, thank you for your comments. I didn't realize anyone noticed whether I was here or not. You made me feel better. |
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Ladyhawke Member
since 2001-09-01
Posts 86 |
Hi, ThisDiamond! I didn't forget you in the above-post. My messages disappeared when I used the back/forward buttons, and I couldn't remember everyone's names. Thank you very much for reading and for replying. I appreciate it. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautifully bittersweet, sweet friend, this is a wonderful breather of powerful emotions! (sigh) May you forever share a life of happiness with a love that will leave you breathless in joy, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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