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A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2002-03-07 01:37 PM




Promises….

In the whisper
of a kiss,

ever so slight…

yearnings unfold
in the promise

of passion….

© Copyright 2002 Annie - All Rights Reserved
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with you
1 posted 2002-03-07 01:39 PM


ahhhha yes
beautiful  

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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2002-03-07 01:40 PM


I hope you keep your promises

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Duncan
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3 posted 2002-03-07 01:40 PM


Promises...kept
Passions...met

Startime
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4 posted 2002-03-07 01:46 PM


*sigh* to feel the reality of promises contained in the passion of a kiss...*sigh* beautiful..I love this poem...it feels wonderful...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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5 posted 2002-03-07 03:08 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may your heart forever sparkle with loves promise with the one you love! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Annie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Dulcinea
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6 posted 2002-03-07 03:24 PM


Passion's promises seem to never be broken do they? Beautifully done!
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7 posted 2002-03-07 04:06 PM


this is a promise that everyone should keep. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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