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kaile
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0 posted 2002-03-07 12:29 PM


the doc shook his head
and the race was on

a flawed and unfair race it was though;
they were already lagging behind--
the tyrannical offender spread too fast for their liking

burdened by their unmatched samples,
plagued by low morale and almost tangible guilt,
they appealed to all for help

PLS HELP PLS HELP PLS HELP PLS HELP plsssssssss

only 50 people found it
within themselves
to step forward

darling remained blissfully unaware,
thinking that he would (finally!) read
Harry Porter Vol 5 this year


[This message has been edited by faterider (03-07-2002 12:31 PM).]

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interesting.
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2 posted 2002-03-07 02:44 PM




(giggles in delight) Awwwwwwww, I want to read Harry Potter Volume 5 so badly too, I just can't wait for it to come out, I've been waiting forever! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Heng, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-03-07 04:14 PM


yes. . . a skewed picture of the world. . .

I like the total abstractness of this faterider. . . it seems more you here. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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