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The Lady Of The Sky
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The Lady Of The Sky |
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janmew Member
since 2001-10-27
Posts 134Canada |
The Lady Of The Sky She stands on the eastern shore with cheeks like the dawn of day and hair like blazing fire. Her dress glows like gossamer in shades of yellow and peach and blue, as she gracefully raises from her sleep. She is the infatuation of many men yet she lingers tantalizingly just outside their grasp. They are left simply gazing at her splendor, so brilliant, nary an eye has captured the full impact of her radiance. She moves with such alluring grace; her gown flowing behind her in the breeze, until she finally reaches her destination. And there, she lays herself down to sleep, beside the dark pools of night, until the dawn of the next new day. (She is the sun, of course) Poetry is an expression of feelings. I do not write poems, but rather, the poems use me to write themselves. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!!!You weave with a magic pen...this poem is absolutely delightful...I love it...**big hugs**  She is indeed The Lady Of The Sky...Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Janmew, A good write, enjoyed the read. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I just love teh imagery in your words, I love the sun so so much, and can't wait for spring and summer to come for her to light the world with love and cheer! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtakingly beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jan, thank you for sahring!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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