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Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2002-03-07 08:55 AM

Covers wrapped in anaconda grip
from tossing the tumbles
my breath came in gasps
keeping pace with beat of panic heart

I'd been there

we talked a while about old times
and you morphed back to a face of memory
while deep inside I felt the rise
of teen age lust

Where did the rest of them come from?
trampling through to disturb reveries
with foxy eyes staring boldly
and tongues like vipers hissing.

You were gone again,
and the grip of blankets had tightened
the restrictions trapping me
as I had traveled.

No sleeping now...
untangled I rose to let quieting heart feel
the loss of another dream.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-03-07 08:58 AM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Ron, this is definitely a time era I am living right now, I have been so lovesick over my dream girl and I yearn to first hold her hand and share true happiness with her and try not to be strangled by fate! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, my thoughts are with you, this is a powerfully heartaching poem! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2002-03-07 09:05 AM

untangled I rose to let quieting heart feel
the loss of another dream.
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So often when I read poetry ... there will be that one line that just takes my breath...sometimes like a kick in the chest.
felt this one Capt.
well done poet sir...as always.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2002-03-07 09:15 AM

Cpat Hair,
Enjoyed the read.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2002-03-07 09:20 AM

viva Cpat
well done,
some real moves in this one

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2002-03-07 09:23 AM

Add another thanks to your growing pile of admiring readers...

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

6 posted 2002-03-07 09:26 AM

Good morning Captain. As always your poems inspire...

~Tier

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

7 posted 2002-03-07 09:42 AM

*sigh* I hate to wake up from the dreams I weave in my sleep....reality is so cold and lonely...Magnificent writing that I could feel even this morning as I woke to a world where dreams may never come true...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

8 posted 2002-03-07 10:21 AM

Cpat

I think you dream in Technicolor..such are your words that feel the dream real.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

9 posted 2002-03-07 11:12 AM

I like your dreams, Ron, and your poetry

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