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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Symbols In the evenings early hours Floats the smell of jasmine flowers Across the looms delicate rune Under light of a yellow moon And the ground in sullen lingers Like the touch of lovers fingers Turning love to piano reams Where lay the quasi-drifting dreams. The voice of natures gaming sound Like baying dogs where game is found. Those staying howls that wails and falls Each single sound that makes its call The breeze catches its aching prey Making its final stand at bay A moment’s charm away from harm With trembling heart in high alarm Fierce symbols touch the real of birth Jasmine and fear that stalk the earth |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Seymour, your beautiful images open my soul to new music. I sense a beautiful symphony of sensual description playing through a lovely vapor of symbols, enriching our poetry. Thanks!  ((Seymour)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (03-07-2002 12:25 PM).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
In the evenings early hours Floats the smell of jasmine flowers Across the looms delicate rune Under light of a yellow moon And the ground in sullen lingers Like the touch of lovers fingers Turning love to piano reams Where lay the quasi-drifting dreams. ========================================= The breeze catches its aching prey Making its final stand at bay ========================================== Fierce symbols touch the real of birth ======================================== Could this poem be any cooler!! Stinky this is delightful ... the combination of imagery, rhyme and life's moral is classic Sy poetry. But for me its the vision that your poems always contain...those lines of clever depth and unique analogy....written with your egde of way-cool-perspective. And the ground in sullen lingers Like the touch of lovers fingers Turning love to piano reams Where lay the quasi-drifting dreams. HOW COOL IT THAT!!!! WAAAAAAY COOL me Stinkywinkielove... WAY COOL     |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Beautiful Sy and i love jasmine..i love it when i read a poem and come across a word no one else uses...*Quasi*..first time ive seen that word..Enjoyed.. ~Victoria~ "Mistakes are the portals of discovery." |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Interesting write Seymour... flows well and evolves in imagery to the end... nicely done..nicely done indeed. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Silver, A very nice comment thank you. JM, I can't tell you how wonderful it is when someone understands what you write. And I knight you my queen of butterflies. Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Victoria, In that case I send you a quasi Cpat Hair, Thank you for the nicely, nicely. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"In the evenings early hours Floats the smell of jasmine flowers Across the looms delicate rune Under light of a yellow moon"  (smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I always love the wonderful imagery you put into your words, jasmine is one of my favorite aromas and always makes me feel lovesick! (big hugggsssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is outstanding! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Thank you my friend. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
The scents of flowers, voices, breezes all put together to form a beautiful picture seymour. well done. love this. floria Floria |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Floria, |
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