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Ivy Rose
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0 posted 2002-03-06 11:52 PM





A dozen wings flittering
through her heart,
wings of feathered passion
softly, gently, lifting her
to new vistas in love.
Sound echoing off sound walls
permeating the new heavens,
the clouds of
desire's inspiration.
Ever so silently
whispering, breathing life
into love unspoiled,
tender moors of I do
swallowimg up the last
vestiges of doubt and fear.
Heart beating out
the glad tidings, the sure
refrain of love's song,

~~~love's lingering kiss~~~

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1 posted 2002-03-06 11:59 PM


*sigh* this magnificent poem causes gentle flitterings in the heart as the love flies from your words to the soul of your reader...I love it, Ivy...you always have such a stunning way of writing that leaves me in awe of you....BRAVO!!!**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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2 posted 2002-03-07 08:08 AM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words of love always make me smile, this is breathtaking! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

janmew
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3 posted 2002-03-07 10:25 AM


This is indeed very beautiful, with a calm soft feel to it. Nicely done!

Jan

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4 posted 2002-03-07 11:05 AM


Ivy Rose,
A lovely write, enjoyed the read.

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5 posted 2002-03-07 11:08 AM


Wonderful write!  I loved it.  
Let the bliss last forever!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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