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I Know You...... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 In moment of weakness heart fluttered, fell an instant of your magic, caught in spell bound to your soul, many lifetimes ago no memories of the past, still, I know unspoken knowledge of intimate thought answers to questions, unwittingly sought comfort indescribable, you with me our paths to cross, seems it was destiny inevitable us meeting,here, now I don’t question the why, don’t ponder how it is something,I have come to accept a mystery my soul, quietly kept a mirror reflection, soul recognized a plan that fate had so timely devised ~SEA~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* this is just how love should be...your soul knows each other as if throughout the ages you have searched out one another....*sigh* a magnificent poem that is filled with timeless love....I love it...**big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Susan, Awwww.. I really like this Romance is very much your thing Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Very lovely, SEA, and inspirational! Corinne |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
A very lovely sonnet, my friend. Though not a believer is fate, I do find the concept intriguing, nonetheless. (((hugs)))  Michael Stars will shine when I am gone |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Startime~ sometimes, it is the way it is, thank youTara~ thank you very much, I think you do romance wonderfully Corinne~ thank you Michael~ how can you not believe in fate?! We are gonna have to talk mister LOL  |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
bound to your soul, many lifetimes ago no memories of the past, still, I know Susan - Very nice. I used to be a believer in fate, but now, I no longer am. Oh well, what is a cynic to do.lol Dave |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Dave, I hope something wonderful happens to change your mind....I have met people in my life and ya know, you just know them, that instant connection doesn't "just happen" it's soul recognition believe as you choose dear one, either way is good... and I thank you |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
I love this! And the last two lines are perfectly phrased Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ 'inevitable us meeting,here, now I don’t question the why, don’t ponder how it is something,I have come to accept a mystery my soul, quietly kept' Loving these moments shared~ Thank you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Well, I believe in fate...this is perfect, Susan. No other way to explain somethings. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I think there is a master plan for everything, Susan, and everything works out as it's supposed to.....I LIKE this one! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Excellent writing Sea...James |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You can take that star you've been keeping in the corner for one of the Kids' projects and paste it on this, y'hear? This makes me Very proud of you! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always speak with such tender and beautiful love! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may timeless joy forever fill your heart, this is a breathtaking sonnet! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you!  Love, Noah Eaton |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
In moment of weakness heart fluttered, fell an instant of your magic, caught in spell bound to your soul, many lifetimes ago no memories of the past, still, I know unspoken knowledge of intimate thought answers to questions, unwittingly sought comfort indescribable, you with me our paths to cross, seems it was destiny =================================== This is wonderful writing Sea-girlie... tight and melodic ... no words more than needed and cadenced kissed. love the pic too |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
La la la... this poem is gorgeous and epic. It reads like a song just because it flows so easily. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
What a beautiful sonnet! I am constantly impressed by your poetic growth and artistry! Now, I must rest and allow my heart to reduce it's rate and remind myself this was not, unhappily, written for me. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sea This is writing at its best...very well done! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very nice, I liked it a lot |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
Destiny speaks in many languages. This is one of them. The most honest one. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Upon reading some of your other pennings, this would tell me that you have a lot more coming from that mind of yours. Your muse sits your shoulder quite well. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Melissa~ you are wonderful, thank you Marge~ I thank you kindly Cowboy ~ you make me smile, thank you Balladeer~ thank youJames~ thank you Sunshine ~ that means more to me than you could know Noah~ your replies always make me smile, you are such a sweetie,. Thank you Janet~ you rock chica, thank you Interloper~ you are the best! thank youMartie~ coming from one I admire very much, that means a lot, thank you very much! Vandana~ thank you PS~ good to see your name, thank you Romeo~ you are a sweet one, thank you Soleil Noir~ I really hope that is a good thing  LOLThank you very much |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
I love the idea here of fate and destiny. lovely sonnet Sea. I enjoyed reading it. floria Floria |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Floria, you are always so nice, thank you very much for that |
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