Tiptoe - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

0 posted 2002-03-06 10:26 PM

Soft sound through the corridors at night
masked intruder stalks, no presence in sight
thought from the top of my head, goblins tiptoe too
as the wicked witch that gave sleeping beauty an adieu.

Nutcracker ballet: swans coalesce, depart, flutter by
season after season changes, tiptoed through the sky
at brinks of war, modern man walks on glass,keeps relatively sublime.
intruders gain access to our treasure troves, tiptoe in our minds.

soft sounds tiptoe to babe's crib in the night
fairies splash magic sand, then take flight;
chase darker spirits out the bedroom doors of our heads
season after season passes, tiptoe sounds clutter steads.

[This message has been edited by ecrivan (03-07-2002 02:15 PM).]

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2002-03-06 10:33 PM

this is a GREAT write

I love this line....

"thought from the top of my head, goblins tip toe too"

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

2 posted 2002-03-06 10:36 PM

had to make some corrections though, tiptoe is one word

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-03-06 10:38 PM

(sigh) Wow, I have a dream catcher in my room to chase away evil spirits that try and invade my dreams; I guess I have gotten into that idea after suffering many nightmares as a child and wanting ever so much to have happy dreams! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, your wonderful words always amaze me, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

4 posted 2002-03-06 11:10 PM

Noah,

those spirits are always around..hehe

Masked Intruder

Moderator

Senior Member

since 1999-05-23

Posts 1231
Near golden sunsets

5 posted 2002-03-07 01:18 AM

We're not all that bad. *grins*

Nice write.

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

6 posted 2002-03-07 02:21 PM

Hello Masked Intruder,

if you're referring to us not all being a clutter of spirits vying for headspace, I fully agree..glad you liked it..tried looking you up on your website and cannot get to it, has it changed?

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.