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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-03-06 09:32 PM




(Here is another song I have written in Spanish, with an English translation below, my mind has had a Latin Muse lately!)

Te Rie, Te Llora (You Laugh, You Cry)
By: Noah Eaton
3/6/02

Que te ha dejado atrás ha sido lavado por la lluvia
Que te soñó ha llegado a ser el azufre de su mar
Sus creencias se han reordenado
Suprimido en su reclamo del purgatorio
Que te se ha sido privado de
Es por qué yo estoy aquí para te, mi amor

Tan tu permanece aquí con mí
Y los abrazos y besas
Y todos los sueños que hemos nutrido
De toda la caridad del sol que usted ha dia
A pesar de su melancolía
Junto seremos protegidos por la luna
Para son dos almas, un corazón
Que tendré usted cierra siempre
Yo lo dependeré de
Te rie, te llora

Toda la inocencia que usted pensó usted perdió
Todo que puede ser ido sinceramente
Es hipotecado a la sangre
Toda la esperanza que podemos consumir
Toda la duda que viene a ser
Pronto será cedido
Te se sitúa en el ensayo otra vez
Te se opone, pero aclaro sus lágrimas
El todo que usted quiere ser, todo usted quiere perdonar
Es por qué yo estoy aquí para te, mi amor

Tan tu permanece aquí con mí
Y los abrazos y besas
Y todos los sueños que hemos nutrido
De toda la caridad del sol que usted ha dia
A pesar de su melancolía
Junto seremos protegidos por la luna
Para son dos almas, un corazón
Que tendré usted cierra siempre
Yo lo dependeré de
Te rie, te llora

Yo lo lloveré con besos
Yo lo tendré por cada noche

Así que tu permanece aquí con mí
Y con los abrazos y besas
Y todos los sueños que hemos nutrido
De toda la caridad del sol que usted ha dia
A pesar de su melancolía
Junta seremos protegidos por la luna
Para son dos almas, un corazón
Que tendré usted cierra siempre
Yo lo dependeré de
Te rie, te llora

(English Version)

That which you have left behind has been washed by the rain
That which you dreamt has become the sulfur of your sea
For which your beliefs have been rewritten
Suppressed in your purgatory claim
That which you have been deprived of
Is why I am here for you, my love

So you remain here with me
And the hugs and kisses
And all the dreams we have nurtured
Of all the charity of the sun you've gave
In spite of your melancholy
Together we'll be shielded by the moon
For we are two souls, one heart
I will hold you close always
I will depend on you
You laugh you cry

All the innocence you thought you losed
All that may truly be gone
Is mortgaged to your blood
All the hope we can consume
All the doubt that comes to be
Soon will be compromised
You situate yourself in trial again
You object yourself, but I rinse your tears
Everything you want to be, all you want to forgive
Is why I am here for you, my love

So you remain here with me
And the hugs and kisses
And all the dreams we have nurtured
Of all the charity of the sun you've gave
In spite of your melancholy
Together we'll be shielded by the moon
For we are two souls, one heart
I will hold you close always
I will depend on you
You laugh, you cry

I will shower you with kisses
I will hold you through every night

So you remain here with me
And the hugs and kisses
And all the dreams we have nurtured
Of all the charity of the sun you've gave
In spite of your melancholy
Together we'll be shielded by the moon
For we are two souls, one heart
I will hold you close always
I will depend on you
You laugh, you cry


[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-06-2002 09:35 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-03-06 10:09 PM


Noah, I think you should send this one to Enrique. It would make a great song.
Sandra

Bridget Shenachie
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2 posted 2002-03-06 10:36 PM


Noah, have you put this to music?  Do you write music, also?  Thanks for sharing!

Bridget

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3 posted 2002-03-06 10:41 PM


"Together we'll be shielded by the moon
For we are two souls, one heart
I will hold you close always"


Noah, this is fantastic....I wish my muse was bi-lingual

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4 posted 2002-03-06 11:49 PM


lovely noah dear..maybe tomorrow your french muse will visit haa

             ~Vic

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