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walker
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0 posted 2002-03-06 09:01 PM



The waves crashed
in the calling shore
The wind blew soft
The full moon reflected
two silhouettes
kissing among the shadows
of the palm trees
I tasted your salty lips
and it tasted so sweet
We were both seventeen
on a summer trip
Far away from home
we found each other
eager to love
That was a long time ago
and I still hold that
thought of both of us kissing
so tenderly
in a far away shore

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1 posted 2002-03-06 09:05 PM


Memories like that never die, walker...actually, they get better with age. Nicely expressed...
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2 posted 2002-03-06 09:07 PM


this is the kind of memory I like to steep in.....how beautiful
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3 posted 2002-03-06 09:28 PM


Trying to remember 17...hmmm.  Oh yeah, that was fun!  Good one, walker.
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4 posted 2002-03-06 09:30 PM


Walker darling girl this is an absolutely wonderful piece from you. I love memories like this. ‘Deer’s right if you’re lucky they get better with the years. Excellent writing


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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5 posted 2002-03-06 09:48 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I dream ever so much to meet my dream girl Joanna and finally touch the heart of true love, just as happily as this precious memory of yours! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may this true love forever sparkle in your heart! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2002-03-06 10:06 PM


"I tasted your salty lips
and it tasted so sweet."
Wonderful...James

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7 posted 2002-03-07 10:06 AM


*sigh* such a wonderful memory to hold safe in your heart where you can take it out and feel it all over again whenever there are quiet moments...I love this one...Thank you for sharing it...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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