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Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

0 posted 2002-03-06 05:38 PM

It's Spring and I'm not ready yet
My roses are coming alive
Depression I'll get soon I bet
And my mood will take a dive

My roses are coming alive
I still have to cut them all you see
And my mood will take a dive
I just haven't the time to be free

I still have to cut them all you see
Spring is coming too soon this year
I just haven't the time to be free
Oh dear, where is my cutting gear

Spring is coming too soon this year
All plants will grow so very big
Oh dear, where is my cutting gear
I think I'm going to be sick

All plants will grow so very big
I'm standing alone in this ordeal
I think I'm going to be sick
It's every year the same I feel

I'm standing alone in this ordeal
Depression will come soon I bet
It's every year the same I feel
It's Spring and I'm not ready yet

Look for the rules in the workshop and don't pity me, it's not all that bad

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-03-06 05:44 PM

BRAVO!!! WOW, THIS IS A FABULOUS PANTOUM, SWEET FRIEND, I JUST KNOW YOUR TEACHER WILL LOVE THIS!!! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSSS) My heart goes out to you and your sorrow, sweet friend, I hope soon you will see spring as a time of rejuvenation and you will feel hope and smiles shine as you soak in the sun and never again will you shed a tear of sadness every spring! (kiss on cheek) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Titia, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

2 posted 2002-03-06 05:52 PM

Good work Titia, I did one last week on my mother, and this subject you chose was excellent, you did very well. You should get a good grade on this. Fun aren't they? floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-03-06 11:15 PM

As was said, fun, but not easy...keeping the theme throughout is the hardest part [for me] but my girl, you seem to whip 'em right out...

Well done!

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