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Iambe's Cooper Creek

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Cpat Hair
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Cooper’s Creek runs cold
But Iambe stripped and waded in anyway
As I watched the shallow water creep
Up her thighs

It was warm.
The sun seemed closer to flaring today
So the chill water was relief
When I joined her

She had waded out the rock
We called turtle back
And stretched in unashamed languor
On her back letting the drops dry

Looking at me with half shut eyes
She asked if I had ever learned to really dance.
I cringed inside while answering only
“no”

She chuckled
Reached for my hand
Pulling me towards the sun
And the thighs I had watched the water lap
Just minutes ago.

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Oh my gosh...oh my gosh...this star is in heaven....I would love to live this one...absolutely magnificent....such freedom and passion....I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! Please drown me in words that paint such visions as these...I will happily enjoy each one...**big big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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Trust me, Startime, this poet WILL drown you in Iambe...

you may want to do a search in the archives...you will enjoy the read, I can guarantee...
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YAY!!! Oh my gosh, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always me smile and envision the most romantic and surreal beautiful things! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton
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this moth has always enjoyed going under for the count of three (rofl)

Careful Capt...steam burns are a .......
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WOW!  Love your lambe stories....they sizzle.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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Wow i missed this one Ron..i dont know how..getting a little steamy here ha.. loved it ..mmmmm

               ~Vic
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Cpat

I'll bet Coopers Creek ran hot for a time, yes?  
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CPatHair--
'Scuse me.  I'm new here and simply wondered how you pronounce "Iambe".
This lady is HOT!

Shenachie
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I AM BE

or at least, that's how I pronounce it...
Duncan
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There is something about her.  Makes me wish she was real.
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Sun,
I thought of it like Iambic pentameter,
or one of those Greek goddesses you can never have.

Ron,
I like that we get to share their pain,
so also, we share their tendernesses.
 
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