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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-03-06 03:11 PM


devoid of fanfare
my eyes alone are speaking
and forever shall

Inspired by:Forever


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2002 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
strbbux
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1 posted 2002-03-06 03:16 PM


Yes I love reading eyes, sometimes they say much, now I must go see who you wrote this in reply to. good work interloper.floria
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with you
2 posted 2002-03-06 03:20 PM


your eyes speak volumes
that which you wouldn't give voice
leaving me no choice

~*~

without utterance
I whisper to you of love
there...here....in my eyes


and again, you inspire

as always

Startime
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3 posted 2002-03-06 03:22 PM


*sigh* Love flows from your eyes into your poems where we can swoon from the pleasure they give us....*sigh* I love to read love in someones eyes...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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4 posted 2002-03-06 03:37 PM


Floria~
Thank you for the read, and I think you will enjoy the piece that inspired this

SEA ~
I read your eyes dear
they speak of undying love
I am unworthy
~*~
how I adore you
I read your body in braille
temperatures rise

Startime ~
Now you are really going to give me a swelled head


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (03-06-2002 05:09 PM).]

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just out of reach
5 posted 2002-03-06 03:56 PM


I cast my gaze downwards as to not see what your eyes might be saying about me.
I love this Interloper!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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6 posted 2002-03-06 03:58 PM


Volumes.... and secrets....


nice one my friend...

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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
7 posted 2002-03-06 04:09 PM





Your eyes speaks
my heart listens
and quickens its beats

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Lovely and inspiring....

Thank you
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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8 posted 2002-03-06 04:19 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may you forever look through loves eyes and feel romance's beauty forever! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always make me smile! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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Canada eh.
9 posted 2002-03-06 04:46 PM


Beautiful...and I love to read anothers eyes.

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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10 posted 2002-03-06 04:58 PM


Interloper darling boy this is beautiful it really is

Look into my eyes
Can you see the sweet surprise?
Just look in my eyes


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


Dee
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11 posted 2002-03-06 05:05 PM


Nothing speaks louder than the eyes. Beautiful sentiments, Interloper.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

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12 posted 2002-03-06 05:08 PM


InterLoper~

Mesmerizing thoughts
From the viewing orbs of you
So hypnotizing~


*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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13 posted 2002-03-06 05:18 PM


I would read your eyes
if you weren't so far away
Instead, I read words.

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14 posted 2002-03-06 05:21 PM



eyes speaking of you
enthralls an enamoured heart
delicate language


Okay..so its not as wonderful as some I've read, but it inspired me..what can I say?

Your poetry whispers sometimes, and sometimes it talks loudly. Either way, it speaks. That is the most important matter of it.

"My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words
Of that tongue’s uttering, yet I know the sound:" "Romeo and Juliet"

Tiersdin
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15 posted 2002-03-06 05:51 PM


Well done, Interloper!

enjoyed!

~Tier

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16 posted 2002-03-06 06:31 PM


enjoyed
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