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Wild Rhyme |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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Wild Rhyme Words flow softly from soul to pen giving visions that make hearts beat They say there are romantic men who do not play at love’s deceit Such poems filled with intense desire that strike a cord as they ignite A single flame becomes a fire from the fantasies you incite Your burning touch I can’t ignore while reading passions of wild rhyme When I whisper words that implore I must seek you out in real time Feeling what you express I find a sigh escapes my wanting lips I’ve been captured heart, soul and mind by secret feelings that eclipse You weave a magic filled with heat leaving me breathless as I melt Now that I’m caught I’ll claim defeat wrapped in a love I’ve never felt Karen Torbiak 2002© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (03-06-2002 11:39 AM).] |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Your burning touch I can’t ignore while reading passions of wild rhyme When I whisper words that implore I must seek you out in real time Bullseye, Karen! |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
wow!!! This is outstanding!!!!!!! where did u learn to write like that!?!?! hehehehe |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful Karen...as always...beautifully penned. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Beautifully written, smooth flowing, and full of passion.You are a great poetess. Peaches  |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I have met a few poets in real..always a treat ...nicely done hon...hugss ~Victoria "Mistakes are the portals of discovery." |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Karen, I find your poem breathtaking. And dear sweet poetess, you indeed inspire me. When you say, "Words flow softly from soul to pen giving visions that make hearts beat They say there are romantic men who do not play at love’s deceit" May I say? O these kind words from women's soul Pure rays emit from bright starlight Come from God and make me whole And draw my heart to seek her sight. My heart beats sweetly from her phrase I pray dear God please comfort me My spirit lifts into her gaze Please let her be reality. ((Karen)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (03-06-2002 03:20 PM).] |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
"wrapped in love I've never felt" Hard to believe Karen, you write of love so beautifully and I love this one. floria Floria |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wouldn't it be wonderful to have a man such as this living side by side with us, writing beautiful words together? Ah, just another fantasy of mine. You did this delectably. Sandra |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
In rhyme of two for but one until the set of waning sun words take you into soft night and pen beneath moon light For in your words so wild We all did grin and smiled as rhyyme so wild does flow and Passions loves it so. Beautifully done Karen...Love this poem.. |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Startime...Beautiful, passionate poem of Love's secret rendering. You have such a gift of writing about flaming desires and hidden passion. This poem just one more example of your tremendous gift. ***Ivy Rose |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
StarTime~ As usual ... so very lovingly penned~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nicely woven Startime...James |
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