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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Not once, but every time he speaks my resolve, such as it is melts into nothing His words, written with little thought as to who I am or my deepest wish manages to call to my heart with damning precision Shhh... be quiet poet lest I fall in love again with your eloquence, then who will save me? ~Tier 3/02 |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Yes shhhh, let the muse speak. Oh that muse of ours, how we do love (him-her) great write tiers. floria Floria |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes to fall in love with the eloquence is far too easy.... nice to see you around my friend... and nice to read again the words you share. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, Floria, I'm glad you enjoyed reading... All too easy, Captain! Thank you, good to read you as well! *smiles* ~tier |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
ahh.. nobody but the true light of the lord!! well done well done |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Isn't it amazing how much words can affect us...they continue to melt me...This is a poem I very much can connect with....I love it...**big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Does this mean you don't want me to write you that poem? |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Interesting, Tier, as I read this last lines for the writer to be speaking to him/herself, so that the other poet may still write... this enjoys my smile....and I have enjoyed the read.... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
will it then be too late?? only the words know. . . well done my friend. . . I like this very much. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Shhh... be quiet poet lest I fall in love again with your eloquence, then who will save me?"  (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooooo cute and romantic, sweet friend, I too always get lovesick just thinking and feeling for my muse, even when my love Joanna is busy, I too am always reminded of her when listening to Shakira's melodies in my head! (giggles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may your Muse forever touch your heart with loevs happiness! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tiersdin, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Eagle scorpion, Thank you, I'm glad that you enjoyed! *smiles* Thank you, Startime, It's good to know that these words penned from the heart has touched someone. Duncan, two words... HA-HA! *wink* Sunshine, your comments always shine! Thank you! Sven, Thank you, I hope you are well. Noah, *Hugs* Thank you muchly! *smiles* ~Tier |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
very pleasantly whispered poem - it breathed softly with a smile, and a little bit of a confident/cocky attitude. i liked it very much peace, C [This message has been edited by Christopher (03-06-2002 06:30 PM).] |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, Christopher... *smiles* ~tier |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
your ending brought me a chuckle.. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Tiersdin I can relate to the capture of words..loved the ending. Great write! |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I'm glad that I could make you smile, Faterider... Thank you, Martie, kind of you to say... *smiles* ~Tier |
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