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Sunday Drive and Brunch
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Sunday Drive and Brunch |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Iambe was closing the hood George’s old truck was idling smooth And no longer dripped green ooze. I handed her a cup of coffee And she plopped down cross-legged On the grass beside the drive Staring into her cup. Those blues turned to look at me And no iceberg reflected chills But the mornings sky softened. “It’s going to be hot.” I offered in small talk Thinking about the gap in her overalls And turning my feelings into Something banal. “Yeah.” She offered with a small twist of lip that if she was angry would have meant run quick…cause she’s about to pull something. Instead, she rose to her feet,reached for my hand And led me towards my old truck, “lets drive” was all she said. Couple of miles down the road To Cooper’s Creek, She slipped the overalls off Then slid over to my side of the truck And asked me if I was still warm. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Perhaps he cannot dance, but he can sure drive one to distraction... well done, Sir... |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Always enjoyed these, Captain, well done... *smiles* ~Tier |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Warm? *S* I'd think sizzling. *S* I liked this very much! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I knew I should've bought a truck instead of that convertable! Glad to see this series continuing, Ron. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
hehehe good one. God alone is alone. Man is not. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling wickedly* Oh my yes...now this is one I really like....the heat will be sizzling in short order....BRAVO!!!**big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Those blues turned to look at me And no iceberg reflected chills But the mornings sky softened. "It's going to be hot." I offered in small talk Thinking about the gap in her overalls And turning my feelings into Something banal. "Yeah." She offered with a small twist of lip that if she was angry would have meant run quick cause she's about to pull something. ============================ you are having what I call a musing moth day.... youre not going to get much work done. (rofl) (but it will be worth it)  |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
i think i like the images here mmmmm...enjoyed ron ~Victoria~ "Mistakes are the portals of discovery." |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Mmmmmmmmmm...sounds like this is indeed going to be a delightful brunch with a slice of sweet canteloupe in the end! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is storytelling in its finest! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
My oh my....it's lambe again....love it! ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
These characters, flawed and wonderful, wend their way to? |
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