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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Beneath the raging waves and foam lies a darkened world of ice and cold tidal blasts crash against rocky shores spraying corrosion high in the air though all a bluff Safe on land, two lovers spoon indifferent to the fury churning in watery boundaries below Their love grows and glows in fireside warmth and comfort Savoring moments shared behind the walls that shelter them from life’s sputtering woes In the morning sunshine they walk along the storm cluttered beach hand in hand smiling forever’s collecting sea shell souvenirs to place along the garden path An island paradise all their own A haven of refuge they call home. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Beautiful poem, Dulci...I won't critique as I bruise easily too and anyway..I would leave it just as it is. *s M |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Very lovely thoughts Dulcie..enjoyed as always...  ~Victoria |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Maureen, thanks! I wasn't sure it would work but sometimes it is good to just go with the flow.. Thanks for responding! Victoria, I appreciate you taking the time to read and let me know you like it! Thanks so much! |
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PearlsB4Swine Member
since 2002-02-01
Posts 130where the heart finds me |
I enjoyed this piece, nothing like home! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
home is where?? but yet. . . where is home. . . the waves speak. . . sorry. . . getting off track here. . . this is wonderful. . . I love the flow and the scene of this. . . speaks softly, but yet, with feeling. . . excellent. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Dulcinea, this is wonderful! All I can say it that I love it! It is fabulous! Very well done! ((Dulcinea)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Dulcie all the way to the sea shells I loved it. nice work. floria Floria |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!BRAVO!!! I love it!!! I love it...This poem is absolutely wonderful...I love the vision you painted....More please. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
1derful! Fabulous! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words and visions always touch my heart deeply, this had me envisioning being on the Florida beach with my dream girl Joanna and sharing loves first kiss with her! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dulcinea, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
PB4S: Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed it! Sven, why in the heart silly! And in each others hearts, wherever they are and their love lives...*Grin* Thank you for the kind compliments! *S* Thank you Newell! I appreciate that very much! ((newell)) God Bless! *S* Floria, thank you so very much, and glad you enjoyed collecting sea shells with me. Startime, ~blushing~ you are too kind, thank you so much you are so sweet! ((hugs))  Interloper, in two words you have made me really smile! Thank you! *S* Noah, what can I say? You are always kind and sweet and I appreciate you! Thanks! |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Sweet Dulcy, i would not have a 'home' if not for your goodness; from the first moment you shared this with me, i thought this was an epic piece of writing. Memories are collected in driftup post-storm pieces. Home is not a house nor is it something physical. It resides where feelings take their breaths. ~special huuuggg~ tSR |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
HOME is definitely in the heart..... and also lying on a shore somewhere... hehe.... you said it well...... i especially liked the spoon part...  fine writing, dulcinea! [This message has been edited by doreen peri (03-08-2002 12:09 AM).] |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Ah, the symbolic crashing of the waves and the peaceful aftermath. Enjoyed |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
tSR, awwwwwwww...thank you sweetheart! I know we talked about the poem, and I was glad you liked it. You saw the message behind the scenery ~grin~  doreen, What can I say? There is nothing like cuddling with someone you love on a stormy night! ~wink~ Home is where the heart is, that is so true a saying and what inspired the poem, thank you so much! RSWells, symbols are always more understandable than language and seem to convey the meaning in a way that never fails to be understood by the heart and mind. Thank you so much! |
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