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Scarred Moth
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
See these puckered scars? Flames burned bright and I was drawn to the light seeking heat to warm the empty marrow of my heart. I perhaps too tender or perchance the flicker too intense was singed to fall in writhe with burning ache of ideal shredding bits of me on each convulsive start and tear See these scars? They are from love in unrequite and torture still in dead of night when I remember flames that burned so bright |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
well penned and the message too adroitly conjured |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I know a moth or two who will relate...you say so much with so little... say a little more... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
seeking heat to warm the empty marrow of my heart ============================ was singed to fall in writhe with burning ache of ideal ============================ See these scars? They are from love in unrequite and torture still in dead of night when I remember flames that burned so bright ===================================== You were expecting me, right? *smiling at you* OK ... Now Im gonna look behind all my mirrors and close my blinds tighter at night cuz you been peeking Capt.  Well, this is engraved on my mothy soul ... and every line is burned in my skin. I have lots of singe-proof mascara, but I dont think that'll be of any use to you *S* Im taking this one for mine poet sir... and thanking you for it..it belongs in me mothy library.Trust me...youre in good company...many pretty blue flames there. So it seems your saving grace was only saving face, |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Really enjoyed this my friend... jwesley |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...Beautifully penned!... ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Nicely written and expressed. floria Floria |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Cpat This poem aches. So well done! |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Very touching, Captain, enjoyed. ~Tier |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
beautiful...... very |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Ron, this is so very sad, my heart goes out to you and your aching heart and the memories of love you hold! (big hugggssssss) My thoughts are with you always, sweet friend, I pray that soon true love will touch your heart and leave your heart swimming with many happy memories! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is powerful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Well, you just spoke my mind again. Whew. "See these scars? They are from love in unrequite and torture still in dead of night when I remember flames that burned so bright" Intense write, Ron. Sandra |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
I have these kind of scars too but keep them hidden beneath the fantasies I weave...Your heartfelt poem touches me...**big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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