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Legends of Dragon Land |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Legends of Dragon Land I shall tell you a legend that has emerged from the depths of dragon land pertaining to occasions when two knights both desire the same fair maidens hand. A fierce battle must be fought within the forests of dragon land and some say the fair maiden can predict which knight will emerge victorious from the dark depths of dragon land. Don't ask me how she knows this just believe me when I say she can. Really it's very stressful for all who wait to discover which knight will be the fair maidens lover. Only the fair maiden enjoys the fight in absence of worry and fright. For somehow she already knows only her true knight will win this dragon land fight and soon he will emerge from the forest victorious in time to kiss her all through a perfect night... JamesLee March06 2002 [This message has been edited by JamesMichael (03-06-2002 12:12 AM).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
if she knows she should spare them the fight..... |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Oh my gosh I just went through that situation!!! Only one of them didn't know he was fighting for me... I totally love this poem! I'm definately putting it in my library!! Just don't fall in love with me and no one will get hurt |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Ah yes Sea...so many knights lives you could have saved were you the fair maiden in question...but alas many knights desire the fight and are not so easily rejected...James |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Great write.Glad it turns out the be the true knight. Peaches Mabr the maidens have a sixth sense hmmmm. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssssss) Ooohhhhhh...this is a wonderful powerful poem, sweet friend, I too wish they can only spare the fight and she can choose dearly her sweet knight! (smiles) This is wonderful, sweet friend, yuour beautiful words always make me smile! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
James, I like this, I hope the good knight wins the fair lady. and they live happily ever after. floria Floria |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
yes i agree with Sea..enjoyed james ~Vic |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I like this James. And I agree it is to bad she didn't spare them the fight. I guess all was not perfect in the past either, hm? Sandra |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Tis but a mome in time doth pass That thee maid doth come to mind For tis this knight seeks the lass in Dragon Land wilt she I find. I like this James, you should have that all figured out by now....If you need a poetic adversary, courting the maiden fair....surely I would be pleased to write with you in this endeavor... I do like this write JM...nicely done.. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
STUNNING....You have captured the heart of this star for she is a lover of both dragons and knights....James this is absolutely wonderful writing and I loved every minute of reading it...Into my library it goes...Thank you...thank you...**big big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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