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Open Poetry #19

Death at the Four Seasons

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2002-03-05 11:46 PM

I danced and I fiddled
in the middle of spring

Disencumbered
the number
of what summer
can bring

Gathered
the leaves
where thieves
would have got them
and cherished
the perish
of green
in the autumn

I splintered
in winter
a pile
at the bottom
and to
all of my seasons
too soon
I forgot them

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (03-06-2002 01:25 AM).]

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

1 posted 2002-03-06 01:41 AM

Liking this...
and needing to give everyone a bit SLAP for ingoring it!

Nice to see ya writing here still.

Don't they know you're a genius when it comes to work like this?

Geesh..

How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so.
~Sarah MacLachlan~

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

2 posted 2002-03-06 03:15 AM

Ah time passes so quicky, and this reminds me of the time I waste not making more memories. Nice to see you again Walt.

~* Without deep reflection one knows from daily life that one exists for other people ." *~

Einstein

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

3 posted 2002-03-06 07:17 AM

I like this..it's a bit different for you Walt. And I don't accept Jenn's slap...

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2002-03-06 03:09 PM

me either deVine. . .

well done walt. . . you get better with every reading. . .

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Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-03-06 04:17 PM

(sigh) Awwwwww, I know just how you feel, sweet friend, I too have a tendency to forget so many precious memories and I yearn and vow ever so much now to cherish every moment with bliss and hope! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walter, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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