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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-03-05 11:08 PM





Laying, resting, settling my thoughts
Picturing "It only takes two" in my mind.
The twoness of loving, the give and the take.
When I am with you, it's two they will find.

In the mirror I see, the other of me
My twin, not of birth but of heart.
It only takes two, when our eyes smile in meet,
Never can we be apart.

When I'm incomplete, in the absence of you
And I see you walking in line
with arms stretched out to hug and to greet
It only takes two, yours to mine.

Two to team up, a couple to make
to pair, to duet and sing.
Like the time we were playing and I needed a push,
It only takes two to swing.

Two to bet, to make a deal,
Two ones to make up a two,
To balance a scale, to cross a path
to multiply, it only takes two.

Tonight I divided my time in half,
so two poems I could write.
I hear someone calling in stereo,
It only takes two times...so goodnight.

M


"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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1 posted 2002-03-05 11:15 PM




(smiles) YAY!!! Ooohhhhhhhh...THIS IS WONDERFUL, SWEET FRIEND, THIS IS AN EXCELLENT CHALLENGE REPLY!!! (kiss on cheek) And may your heart forever write the beauty of these two pleasures, sweet friend, your words always make me smile! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

ecrivan
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2 posted 2002-03-05 11:21 PM


yes it takes two to tango!nicely done


Dulcinea
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3 posted 2002-03-06 11:26 AM


Too many Two's to decipher...need my calculator...hehehee...Just joshin...this is really cool...
Duncan
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4 posted 2002-03-06 11:48 AM


Two to team up, a couple to make
to pair, to duet and sing.
Like the time we were playing and I needed a push,
It only takes two to swing.

Swings were made for poetry like this!

Poet deVine
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5 posted 2002-03-06 11:48 AM


I like this! Good job.
Startime
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6 posted 2002-03-06 11:51 AM


I love it...you have done two just right....**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

PearlsB4Swine
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where the heart finds me
7 posted 2002-03-06 02:21 PM


Wow, now that can hurt if you say it too fast. This was really good!
Silver Streak
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8 posted 2002-03-06 02:47 PM


In the mirror I see, the other of me
My twin, not of birth but of heart.
It only takes two, when our eyes smile in meet,
Never can we be apart.

Maureen, this is fabulous. Wonderful, wonderful poetry.

((Maureen))
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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