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Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

0 posted 2002-03-05 10:27 PM

I Want To Dance

Hearing tender notes of your words
caressing me with gentle touch
Flowing like the spring song of birds
from a heart that’s offering much

Swaying to silent rhythm, felt,
as they fill my soul with delight
Inner feelings that make me melt
while over the distance they invite

The mood lifts me with sweet desire
when waves of passion start to build
We both know what would then transpire
from music that leaves us fulfilled

I want to dance to written song
with hints of a future unknown
Held safe in arms where I belong
wrapped in the love that you have shown

Karen Torbiak 2002 ©

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2002-03-05 10:49 PM

I think we all want this Karen...James

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-03-05 10:52 PM

Beautiful Karen....love the dance.
Enjoyed this one tonight!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

3 posted 2002-03-05 10:54 PM

Yes, this does sound like the perfect dance doesn’t it? I think that you shall find a worthy partner for your dance before long Karen. Such a soft romantic heart doesn’t walk alone for too long.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

4 posted 2002-03-05 11:08 PM

Dance on, Karen. The band will play your song soon.....

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2002-03-05 11:11 PM

That darn clone,  is he hiding from you again?

He isn't supposed to be shy...And I know they
taught him how to dance.....

Seriously,  lovely write...gosh girl,  I
would certainly give you a dance...would
be an honor...  You are such a special
part of this place and my family...come
meet at the ball..

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

6 posted 2002-03-05 11:31 PM

Karen, this is so very beautiful. Your poetry just gets better and better and better. I love it and I love you!

"I want to dance to written song
with hints of a future unknown
Held safe in arms where I belong
wrapped in the love that you have shown"

May I say:

When you want to dance I'll write you a song
The words of your heart I'll just sing along
As you and your lover fly higher than high
Wrapped in your Starlight that shines from your sky.

((Karen))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

7 posted 2002-03-05 11:45 PM

Karen,
How beautiful.I love the song, the dance, the inspiration.Your heart is so full of all of these things.
Peaches

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

8 posted 2002-03-05 11:58 PM

Karen,

Your words are always so tender and beautiful

I enjoyed.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

9 posted 2002-03-06 12:03 PM

Nicely done Karen...as always..hugss..

~Vic

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

10 posted 2002-03-06 01:07 AM

would that we could all dance in the arms of comfort and joy

well done!!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

11 posted 2002-03-06 06:33 AM

what ecrivan said...*s and as always a beautiful poem Karen.
hugsssss
M

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

12 posted 2002-03-06 08:34 AM

Know what Karen, I once fell in love with a man, cause he asked me to dance, and we danced so beatifully together. It was the most romantic time of my life
Sigh..
Sandra

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

13 posted 2002-03-06 10:08 AM

Everyone above took the words right out of my mouth, so I will say. Beautiful as usual Karen, Love this, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

14 posted 2002-03-06 11:44 AM

You make me want to dance... when I know from experience I'd fall flat on my face. *S* This is beautiful, Startime... may your orchestra play without ceasing. *S*

Dulcinea
Senior Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
IN

15 posted 2002-03-06 11:50 AM

As always, your beautiful sentiments make my heart want to dance in joy! Wonderfully done! *S*

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

16 posted 2002-03-07 12:09 PM

This is beautiful and vibrant, Karen!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

17 posted 2002-03-07 02:03 PM

Would you prefer a waltz or a foxtrot?

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