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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-03-05 09:45 PM




(My Joanna has been in the process of moving, and I have missed her so much; this is a thought of yearning I had on my mind, I guess I have been feeling so lovesick lately )

Hopeless Romantic
By: Noah Eaton
3/5/02

I feel like a lovesick kitten
Softly crying for your embrace
I feel like I have a fever
Waiting for your love to find my way

I used to be alone on the streets
Crawling in the cold rain
I hid in the alley, disillusioned
Whining for someone to take me home and erase my shame

Then you found me there
Crawling in the dumpster of broken dreams
You pulled me out and hugged me by your shoulder
Here is gone, but out there is a lovers destiny

Now I am just a hopeless romantic
Following my lodestar
Wanting to touch your lips
And share loves first kiss, wrapped in your arms

Come to me, my dear
Break me free of fates chains
I want to purrrrrrr happily close to your heart
I want to love you, my sweet angel, everyday


[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-05-2002 09:46 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-03-05 09:50 PM


Yes sweet Noah!  You are a hopeless romantic.  But, I think  most writers are.  You will be just fine and back with your beloved Joanna in no time at all.
~Hugs Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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2 posted 2002-03-05 09:52 PM


im sure she misses you too sweetie..its nice to have someone to miss...hugsss

                    ~Victoria~

"Mistakes are the portals of discovery."
-- James Joyce


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3 posted 2002-03-05 10:00 PM


Hang in there Noah...I am sure your love will
return soon....

Tracey
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4 posted 2002-03-05 11:10 PM


Ahh, this is so sweet. I’m sure she’ll be thrilled when she gets the chance to read it.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2002-03-05 11:47 PM


I know when we find someone that honestly cares about us it makes a world of difference...James
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6 posted 2002-03-05 11:53 PM


do hope things stay well with you..you second half should return..and in the meantime..hopeless romantic, come on..where there is an earnest relationship there must be hope

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7 posted 2002-03-06 12:03 PM


I'm sure she misses you as much as you miss her.You will soon be back in each other's arm, but until then here's lots of hugs.

Peaches

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8 posted 2002-03-06 12:34 PM


"I want to purrrrrrr happily close to your heart"

So cute Noah! I love it! I hope that you get to talk to her again soon!

Just don't fall in love with me and no one will get hurt

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9 posted 2002-03-06 12:19 PM


So sweet Noah I am so glad you found each other. love this sweet poem overflowing with love. floria

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But die with all their music in them"
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10 posted 2002-03-06 12:27 PM


Noah, You always write so well, your heart is a waterfall of words cascading to delight us all. I hope your Joanna is back with you soon.
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11 posted 2002-03-06 02:16 PM


Noah,

This is both sad and so very sweet.  I'm sure she'll treasure this.

Michael

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Earth will spin on as before
Gulls still race along the shore
Morning star still kiss the dawn

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just out of reach
12 posted 2002-03-06 02:31 PM


Sweet Noah, I am sure that your beloved has longing thoughts for you as well. Very pretty indeed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Suetang
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13 posted 2002-03-06 03:58 PM


Hello Noah

From one hopeless romantic to another, this was lovely.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

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14 posted 2002-03-06 04:09 PM


You are indeed a hopeless romantic, Noah...and this poem is a true reflection of that...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
15 posted 2002-03-06 04:29 PM


~Noah..

A sweetly hopeless romantic.....

I loved the kitten idea..nice

Thank you
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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16 posted 2002-03-06 06:46 PM


Noah - Very nice.  By the way, did you take my advice and call that travel agent?lol

Dave

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17 posted 2002-03-06 06:51 PM


my friend hang in there,your love will be there with you in time,you will be just fine. enjoy your read
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