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Won't You Come In And We'll Talk For Awhile? (Re: Domestic Violence) PG |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada 
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 ~* Won't You Come In And Talk For Awhile? *~ © Mysteria 03/2002 ~*~ Play Remembering by Bruce de Boer ~*~ Theirs is a home on an average street, Lace curtains, and pretty garden so neat. Beyond the doorway all you’ll see, is a woman living captive in misery. She knows nothing else but feeling bad, hiding behind sunglasses, feeling sad. She walks with her shamed head bowed down, hiding a beautiful face in a permanent frown. Like Peter Pumpkin Eater, he kept her in, her skin’s so pale; her body’s so thin. No self-esteem, she’s lost her spark, so very alone, living in that dark. The PTA, the church, their friends, would never guess from the message she sends. She’s been held hostage, it was just the way, until she finally had enough one day. She had wanted to leave him before you know but with no money, and a child where would she go? One day she ducked as he threw at her a book. He yelled, "Be quiet, sit there and look." Well look she did, and inside was some hope. Pages with testimonials of others starting to cope. Right in her neighbourhood there was help at hand, Women went there to escape, and take a stand. She got up the nerve to go by there one day, just wanting to look and never to stay. She was greeted at the door by a woman with a smile, “Won’t you come in and we'll talk for a while?” Before she knew it she had told her tale, constantly looking at her watch, biting her nails. The woman hugged her and said, “You're welcome to stay here, we'll help you through this, please have no fear.” After a bit of therapy, and legal work she was now free, so healthy and happy, were her son and she. She greeted each day now with a great big smile, healthy, confident and walking in style. It was many years later, when she looked out the door, where she now volunteered, but had stood once before. She greeted a woman standing there with her big smile, “Won’t you come in and we'll talk for awhile?” ~*~ ~* For those enduring domestic abuse - know there is help *~ "Ask, and it shall be given you; seek, and ye shall find; knock, and it shall be opened unto you: for every one that asketh receiveth, and he that seeketh findeth; and to him that knocketh it shall be opened, Matt. 7:7, 8. " ~* Without deep reflection one knows from daily life that one exists for other people ." *~ Einstein [This message has been edited by Mysteria (03-06-2002 01:07 AM).] |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Mysteria - This is a wonderful write with a very important message - there is help. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
WOW that's a good one Sharon, very strong and so true. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mysteria, A wonderful write and there is always hope. But we must seek it. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
I have known a few women like this, and it is wonderful that there is help out there, and that you bring attention to it. This is a heartfelt poem. floria Floria |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
...and you would be one with the outstretched hand. Very nice, mysteria  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Sharon, God Bless You, I know just how she feels for when I was just a little boy, I used to be abused all the time by boys in my neighborhood and my father always ignored me and left me to cope with my own sadness, and I felt that no one would ever love me, but now I have found new hope after finding wonderful friends like you and in taking depression medication, and now I have my dream girl Joanna that I dream of sharing a lifetime of happiness with! (wipes tears) You are a true angel, sweet friend, my dream is to devote my life to helping children who have been hurt and abused and helping them become happy and feel special about themselves! We all love you so much, sweet friend, I know we all can help if we all work together, I join you in your prayers for every one of these children! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
~* Thank you all for your understanding replies *~ and...Noah what a wonderful goal to help others never feel the abandonment of a child. They will identify with you and learn to trust in someone who has had similar circumstances. Noah - I am so sorry you had to endure that as a child, no child should ever feel anything but love and safety. ~* Without deep reflection one knows from daily life that one exists for other people ." *~ |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
A beautiful message of hope and inspiration for those going through this type of tragedy Sharon. Very much enjoyed. Big hugs to you for all that you do, both through your writing, and through your heartfelt assistance to those in need. Best wishes and hugs, (and a big hug to you too Noah)  /Kit |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Sharon Such an inspirational piece of writing you have given us and shown that there is light at the end of the tunnel and people who really care. I hope others in this situation read your encouraging message which was so beautifully written. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And that is one of the things Passions is all about...sharing wrapped up in caring through poetry... well done, Mysteria.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very well said Sharon. And, there is help out there...it's just taking those first few frightening steps. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sharon, you have given the world a message that could help many....IF only one comes forward after reading this poem...that makes it priceless... Thank You!!! |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
A great message you have written here Sharon. I’m sure it must be very difficult for women to get out of abusive situations, and it’s good to know there are places and people like this to help them. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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woodtic Member
since 2002-01-06
Posts 87 |
To be sure hope in the face of hopelessnes is truly a gift, what light has the hand of the helper in the eyes of the helpless. We hear all to often, the circle of violence. Hurrah for the cycle of love! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
MAGNIFICENT...I wish I had known of this kind of place when I needed it....I love how you write such soul moving poems....  **big hugs**Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
~* Once again, you are all awesome *~ There are shelters and houses for women and children running from abuse in every single town. They can be found through family services, churches, and hospitals. Staff there will direct those in need to a place to be safe if they aren't ready to get the police involved. I just wish everyone knew this for the sake of themselves and their chidren, for it is the children that suffer the most, and it is a memory that never leaves them. Okay, hopping off my soapbox now with sincere thanks once again. Thank you all. Without deep reflection one knows from daily life that one exists for other people ." Einstein [This message has been edited by Mysteria (03-05-2002 10:56 PM).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Your wise words are so very essential for every woman who's ever been abused to hear - and hopefully to gain strength to take her destiny into her own hands... It CAN be done.. Thank you for writing this, Mysteria.. Your wisdom is invaluable...  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is wonderful, Mysteria... heartwrenching but filled with hope. *S* Thank you for writing such an important beauty. *S* And if anyone needing help in the US can't find it, call 1-800-799-7233. That's the National Domestic Violence Hot Line. You are NOT alone! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Thanks Nan and Suthern girl as I didn't know the numbers down there, and did not realize that it was the same as here, thank you. Here is the link for folks to find out more about dealing with ALL types of violence, including a children's hotline ~ http://www.ndvh.org/ [This message has been edited by Mysteria (03-06-2002 12:26 AM).] |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
How well you've painted this solemn read... I've been there and just wish that I would have known about such places... Ignorance is not always bliss... Bravo! It is good to know we are not alone and someone out there cares. Love and peace, Maggie ((~.~)) |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Mysteria, A very powerful and inspirational write.May you share this with the world and may it touch the heart of even one.For if it does it's worth all it's weight in gold.Congratulations my dear friend. peaches |
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Midnight Writer Junior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 28Texas |
Sharon this is absolutely great! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Nothing like this was available to me overseas...they took his word over mine....always, and those who knew the truth, didn't tell anyone, didn't help me at all.I left on my own, with my son, and went back to my parents...I still thank God every day for them taking us in and letting me heal and start my life over...It's almost been 10 years for me now, and the healing is still a work in progress. I loved this, as it touched me deeply. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well Gals ~*~ I try to write from my own experiences, and this was one of mine, but 3 times, until I smartened up. The trick is to leave it all behind and literally run for your life let me tell you. When you are in an abusive relationship for the first time you are so scared, especially if there are kids involved....hey....let's take this to the discussion area okay? Maybe we can help someone - so thank you all for your replies. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Mysteria, a worthwhile cause to undertake..their voices do need to be heard |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
You have such a compassionate heart to write about this important issue! Thank you for doing so. I won't get into details, but, my mom and I know all too well the devastation of abuse. This moved me, well said!~ Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
My mother lived this for 14 years...even though she had support and a place to go. There are no easy answers...but talking about it gives it a name and its victims a voice. Any time poety can serve a purpose like this, its just and commendable. Thank you for sharing this and for just being you. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Faterider ~ I thank you for your comment. Melissa ~ I am so sorry to hear of any experience of this, and hope it all behind you now - thanks for reading this one. Janet Marie ~ You are right there are no answers and speaking about it takes it to a new level of trust for victims. I too know many that stay when they could leave, I guess it's so hard to understand that feeling of unworthiness that holds them to what they feel they deserve. So darn sad. Opps, forgot to thank you for your comment, and I am also so sorry to hear of your experience as well. ~* Without deep reflection one knows from daily life that one exists for other people ." *~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I found a link tonight that would be time well spent reading on this topic for those that are interested it is... http://www.angelfire.com/wv2/awomansview/WhenLoveHurts/page1.html |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful thoughts and helping hand inside your words.....this is a keeper to me. you moved my heart deeply with this one dear friend. (((hugs)) Charisma |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Charisma ~ A big hug to you always |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
hope you will submit this one for the book too.....your poetry reach deep with heartmoved depth. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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