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Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2002-03-05 03:05 PM

(I was inspired to write this song from another love song I have stuck in my head!)

Deep Inside Your Eyes
By: Noah Eaton
3/5/02

I now have a reason to laugh
Like a little boy I used to be
For the first time I can cry
But I always cry in happiness
I can now go to the floral shop
With a smile on my face
Buy a dozen yellow roses for you
Stick a sunflower in your hair
Always reminding me of your love

Deep inside your eyes
There’s a true love story
The Guinevere of my dreams I want
A princesses’ sacred diary
And all the things I’ve always dreamed for
Comes singing from you, baby

I hear your words sing in my head
Wherever I go now
As I finish up school
Nervous about graduation
But now I’ll keep on writing more romantic poems
And even when that time comes
When I am on my own…
And everyone else is starting their own lives
We will be together in love forever

Deep inside your eyes
There’s a true love story
The Guinevere of my dreams I want
A princesses’ sacred diary
And all the things I’ve always dreamed for
Comes singing from you, baby

It can feel so crazy
That you are the only one
Out of millions of strangers
That touches my heart so deeply
It seems I’ve flown around the world
And I almost gave up
But now, Joanna, I have you
You have walked into my life
I hope we’ll stay forever

Deep inside your eyes
There’s a true love story
The Guinevere of my dreams I want
A princesses’ sacred diary
And all the things I’ve always dreamed for
Comes singing from you, baby

There’s something about your eyes
There’s something about your eyes
Your eyes…
Make me fall in love all over again…

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-05-2002 03:06 PM).]

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

1 posted 2002-03-05 04:21 PM

There’s something about your eyes
                                         There’s something about your eyes
                                                   Your eyes…
                                        Make me fall in love all over again…
beautiful sweet noah...loved it...hugss

~Vic

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

2 posted 2002-03-05 04:23 PM

Well dear Noah I just got goosebumps all over me from this, Joanna is in for some wonderful days with you my friend, great loving poem. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

DayDreamer99
Member

since 2002-01-23

Posts 72

3 posted 2002-03-05 04:25 PM

*muah* simply beautiful *hugs* keep it up!!!!!
Tifferz

Munda
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since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

4 posted 2002-03-09 05:46 PM

Lovely song Noah.

Indigo
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since 2001-05-17

Posts 602

5 posted 2002-03-09 06:34 PM

Dear Noah~

So beautiful and full of the wonder of new love... your heart is open to everything.
I hope many days of celebrating this feeling await the two of you.

Indigo

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

6 posted 2002-03-09 06:57 PM

Buy a dozen yellow roses for you
Stick a sunflower in your hair

Noah this is just lovely!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

7 posted 2002-03-09 07:02 PM

Noah, my friend, this is so very loving. I'm sure that Joanna will be pleased. You are true poet of love's sweetest words. God bless you my friend.

((Noah))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2002-03-09 07:08 PM

Enjoyed this Noah..James

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2002-03-09 07:16 PM

This is wonderful Noah and your Joanna will love it! Beautiful write!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Sometimes all you really wish for...
is someone to wish for you.~

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

10 posted 2002-03-09 07:39 PM

Yes, eyes, my favorite part of a woman's beauty and certainly, the most sensual. Nice writing, Noah.

Michael

Stars will shine when I am gone
Earth will spin on as before
Gulls still race along the shore
Morning star, still kiss the dawn

~ M. Auguste

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

11 posted 2002-03-09 08:03 PM

Beautifully romantic, Noah...
The eyes truly are the windows to the soul.

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

12 posted 2002-03-09 11:10 PM

Very heartfelt and romantic song you've penned, Noah! Very sweet, I enjoyed the read.

*Krista Knutson*

"An eye for an eye only ends up making the whole world blind." -Gandhi

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

13 posted 2002-03-10 01:16 AM

That's so sweet! *hugs* Keep on writing, and keep on loving!

I want to die peacefully, in my sleep, like my grandfather, not screaming, terrified, like his passengers.

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

14 posted 2002-03-10 11:27 AM

liked it

Accordionmaid
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since 2001-10-28

Posts 153
MA/USA

15 posted 2002-03-11 10:05 AM

Hey, this is beautiful! What great words of love. Joanna is lucky to have you.

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