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rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

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0 posted 2002-03-05 01:10 PM

Love’s Warmth

Sometimes in the dark
silence of night time,
when you talk of the past,
I can hear the faint echoes
Of the ghosts that haunt
your struggling soul.
And all I want to do
is hold my arms open
and feel you come to me,
letting my arms wrap
around you, consuming
you in my love’s warmth.
I want to feel your head
rest against the soft
swell of my breast.
I want to stroke your hair
and whisper words
of my undying love.
I want to attempt to
chase away the memories
that haunt your heart.
I want my love consume
you, protect you.
I want to make you feel
safe and peaceful,
if only for one night.

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2002-03-05 01:20 PM

Nicely presented. I truly enjoyed this piece

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2002-03-05 01:55 PM

your love topics are soothing
to the eyes and
to the mind

enjoy them

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-03-05 03:09 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you deserve the greatest happiness always and I wish for love to forever touch your heart and make you feel safe and warm just as he will always make you feel! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

4 posted 2002-03-05 06:20 PM

Very loving and heartfelt poem rosepetals25, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2002-03-05 10:11 PM

This warmth...the feeling is one that we all
do crave and enjoy....You have written of it
very well....Thanx Tara...

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

6 posted 2002-03-05 10:35 PM

*sigh* oh gosh...this brought tears to my eyes....this poem is truly filled with love's warmth....**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

7 posted 2002-03-05 10:38 PM

You'll make a good mom some day, Tara, because this sounds like a poem of a mother consoling her child after a bad dream. I know it's not about a child, however, and even as adults, we also sometimes need consoling like a child that wakes with a nightmare. Nice work! *hugs*

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2002-03-05 10:47 PM

Nice thoughts...James

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

9 posted 2002-03-05 10:59 PM

This is love indeed. To want to take another’s pain and chase it away. How beautifully you have written this Tara.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
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10 posted 2002-03-06 12:38 PM

Interloper - Thank you. I'm happy you enjoyed.

DS - Thank you.

Noah - You're so sweet, thanks

Floria - Thanks for stopping in.

Barry - Thank you for coming into read.

Karen - I am lucky enough to have the gift of love

And believe me, I know how lucky I am. Thank you.

Michael - Awww

You know how much your response meant to me, thank you.

James - Thanks

Tracey - Thank you for coming in

I'm glad you liked.

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

11 posted 2002-03-06 11:34 PM

The longing and devotion is felt in this tender, sincere write Tara, Its so hard to love long distance. Im sure he felt the warmth of these words...and hes lucky to have you

GenXer
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since 2001-12-15

Posts 583
USA

12 posted 2002-03-06 11:48 PM

Tara - Such strong emotion is so vividly expressed in this write. Nicely done.

Dave

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

13 posted 2002-03-07 06:32 AM

Sometimes that is all we can ask for...I like this one Tara...very soft, gentle...

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