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0 posted 2002-03-05 12:32 PM


Awake and shivering
I knew it was over exposure.

Tendrils of that dream
Must have wedged opened a window
Letting the frigid veins of air
Freeze exposed places in my heart.

The dream itself was warm enough.

Its sensual windings
Climbed the heights of my resolve
As it crept over walls built eons ago
In efforts to keep hordes of feelings
From overwhelming.

Vining itself into chinks of sealed chambers
The icy fingers of now found ways to
Touch places not meant for exposure.

And I am left shaking
Trying to find warmth
Overexposed


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Dark Stranger
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1 posted 2002-03-05 01:10 PM


chill heat
with icy finger wamth
enjoyed the reflections

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2 posted 2002-03-05 01:26 PM


Whoa!
I loved it, Ron.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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3 posted 2002-03-05 01:43 PM



Heck with the whoa...More, Please!

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4 posted 2002-03-05 01:46 PM


Yes please...I want more!
~Hugs, Nancy!

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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5 posted 2002-03-05 05:49 PM


Cpt hair darling boy OH MY this is so amazing, a simply stunning example of form. You really do write with light. Absolutely awesome writing skills

Always your work is a delight, this is awesome yes please more more more


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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6 posted 2002-03-05 05:54 PM


Thrilling!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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7 posted 2002-03-05 07:27 PM




WOW!!! I LOVE THIS TOO, MORE, MORE!!! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, your words always expose so much meaning and beauty! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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8 posted 2002-03-05 11:01 PM


CPatHair~
The idea of a dream-thought symetrically spread against a wall is a uniquely-turned avenue of poetry~
I greatly enjoyed the use of word-imagery to convey those feelings~


*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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9 posted 2002-03-20 01:43 PM



Perhaps it is my overworked imagination [can imagination be overworked? I must think on that...] but somehow I saw this written for Sleeping Beauty...just to let her know how difficult it was to get to her for the awakening...never mind me...my mind is fanciful this afternoon...

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10 posted 2002-03-20 01:55 PM


Ron

Sometimes in dreams we are left open, like innocence.  I liked this honest reflection into feeling from you.

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