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N orth Carolina Girl
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0 posted 2002-03-05 09:54 AM





I decided to take a walk one day.
To look at the flowers along the way.

For some reason I don`t know why.
I turned my eyes toward the sky.

As I just stood there in awe.
From an angel`s eyes I saw a tear fall.

The angel didn`t look sad and wore a smile.
I just stood there quiet for awhile.

Then I saw a door open wide.
God was calling the angel inside.

Then the angel seem to say to me.
These are tears of joy I hope you can see.

Then I realized as the angel turned away.
This special angel was my brother Ray.


This is dedicated to my brother who passed away on March 6,1997.



Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

[This message has been edited by N orth Carolina Girl (03-05-2002 01:18 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-03-05 10:05 AM




(tears fall down my cheeks) God Bless You, sweet Juanita, my heart goes out to your loss but I know deep down with all my heart Ray will always love you and guide you with his love from above and will always be blessed to you, a true angel sister, in his heart forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is absolutely beautiful and sensitive! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Juanita, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


N orth Carolina Girl
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2 posted 2002-03-05 10:12 AM


Noah,thank you as always for your sweet words.

Juanita

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3 posted 2002-03-05 10:31 AM


What a beautiful tribute you've written for your brother... The love shines through your words and anniversaries are always so hard... You have my sympathy as well as my appreciation for a fine poem. *S*
N orth Carolina Girl
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4 posted 2002-03-05 10:49 AM


Suthern,you are so right an anniversary of a death is very hard.Thank you so much for reading this.

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

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5 posted 2002-03-05 12:37 PM


Juanita my dearest friend Oh how I’ve missed your writing darling girl and this  OH MY this is so beautiful an amazing stunning example of spirit in form. You darling girl really do write with light. Absolutely awesome writing skills

Always your work is a delight, even when you’re writing sad your writing bubbles with light. Thank you darling heart for this it teaches us that HE always looks after us. Beautiful darling girl as always this is beautiful


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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6 posted 2002-03-05 12:46 PM


Hi Juanita..hugss..yes im sure he is an angel watching over you.. enjoyed

              ~Vic

Madame Chipmunk
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7 posted 2002-03-05 12:54 PM


Juanita...what a special tribute to Ray.  I am sure that he is looking down at you now and thanking and blessing you for it.

I know how hard these days can be, so here are some special ((hugs)) to help you get through it.  
Its so good to see you back here again, even with this saddest of poems.

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

N orth Carolina Girl
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8 posted 2002-03-05 01:21 PM


Marsha,thank you as always for your sweet reply and being my friend.

Love,

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

N orth Carolina Girl
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9 posted 2002-03-05 01:21 PM


Victoria,thank for reading.

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

N orth Carolina Girl
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10 posted 2002-03-05 01:23 PM


Lyra,I guess talking to you last night help me to do this.I think it will get through this anniversary of his death.TAKE CARE!
Love,

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

MyEnchanted_Melody
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11 posted 2002-03-05 01:42 PM



How wonderful.....& touching.

Thank you for sharing

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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12 posted 2002-03-05 01:51 PM


Wonderful tribute

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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13 posted 2002-03-05 02:26 PM


Juanita, dear lady,
my heart was stood upon, in so many ways,
when i read this.  Your poem, written in delicate,
loving terms, is a perfect way to remember your
own family blood.  That graphic also reminded me of a frigid
winter day, when my grandmother went thru all her old Christmas
cards and letters with me, explaining each of them, and who they were.
There were many of the old cards with wonderful pictures like the one
you inserted with your poem.  Don't you miss that type of painting?
Would love to see more of THAT in galleries instead of the other.
But the memories hit me, after both the poem and picture.
Good ones, Juanita, and for that

I thank you,
tSR
Keep your brother, and God, within your heart, always

N orth Carolina Girl
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14 posted 2002-03-05 02:30 PM


My EnchantedMelody,thank you so much for reading this.

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

N orth Carolina Girl
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15 posted 2002-03-05 02:31 PM


Interloper,thank you I really appreciate it.

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

strbbux
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16 posted 2002-03-05 06:14 PM


Oh my, this drew tears N Carolina, simply beautiful. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

N orth Carolina Girl
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17 posted 2002-03-06 09:34 AM


ShadowRider,thank you so much for reading this it was written from the heart.

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

N orth Carolina Girl
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18 posted 2002-03-06 09:35 AM


Floria,thank you my friend!

Juanita

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