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haydenjames
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since 2002-02-14

Posts 164
Antigua & Barbuda

0 posted 2002-03-05 09:37 AM

deez dayz
the wind dies down, some days cause it's God's will.
leaves fall... decay, all chime by reason.
the time flows, past my whiskers of dim.
memories... Resentment... love.
allergic to me, is her prudent climate.
longings... Confused ideas... Hope.
what would happen, if the sun didn't rise tomorrow?
or if all the roads, were to simply disappear?
time would say it happened so.
yet, no one could say I told you so.
sleep every darken night, so we do.
drive every smooth street, as we go.
yet do we question tomorrow... to quit.
no. Yes. Maybe. I don't know.
quit... should it be,
the light of cure I hold on to?
if yes, will my dreams ever come true?
deez days... Filled they are, only of empty emotions.... deez days...

copyright ©2002 hayden a. james

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My poetry is at: http://www.thehayden.org

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-03-05 10:40 PM

(big hugggssssssss) This is such an emotionally powerful poem on resentment and the hope of something more, sweet friend, I hope you find all your heart desires and the beauty of joy forever sings in your heart! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is outstanding! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

haydenjames
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since 2002-02-14

Posts 164
Antigua & Barbuda

2 posted 2002-03-06 10:48 AM

thanks... i was wondering if anyne saw it *sniff*

[This message has been edited by haydenjames (03-06-2002 11:21 AM).]

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

3 posted 2002-03-06 02:29 PM

i loved it!!
you inspired me!!

here....
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thank you!! enjoyed your poem and perusing your website...

SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

4 posted 2002-03-06 02:45 PM

~I saw it, and have read it again and again, though time doesn't allow for much more of a comment than, I enjoyed, stretched out my mind in thought over it and may return again. Good to see your work here. *Peace.

Bridget Shenachie
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since 2002-01-23

Posts 1056
Kansas USA

5 posted 2002-03-06 09:39 PM

Hayden James--

This was an amazingly, well-expressed poem.
Most of us have been through the times of dreams gone awry to the extent that we are afraid to hope. You said it so well.
And yes, I think that dreams come true. I think that sometimes we don't recognize them when they materialize. So dream well and stay alert.
Thanks for sharing!
Shenachie

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

6 posted 2002-03-06 11:53 PM

Hayden,

This is very good

Everyone can relate to this. You have written your feelings well

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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