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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-03-04 10:50 PM


(This is a song I wrote in Spanish, the English translation is below)        

Yo Siempre Lo Amare (I Will Always Love You)
By: Noah Eaton
3/4/02

He navegado los siete mares
Yo me siento como si he subido el Rocoso
Vi una vez no conjunto del sol en el horizonte
Las canciones cantadas nunca liberaron de labio
Ahora todo aspiro
Deberá caer en ojos para siempre
Navegue lejos con mí en este barco salino
Yo para siempre lo tendré en mis armamentos

Besaré los labio magníficos dulces
Yo me fundiré con usted bajo cada puesta del sol balsámica tropical
He caído en ojos
Yo siempre lo amaré

Toco el cabello sedoso suave
Cariciar su entibiar suave muslos
Su fin del seno para minar
Soñaremos lejos como amantes
Con ojos aprecia suyo
Usted siempre me seduce
He estado buscando para el placer verdadero
Cuál yo he encontrado en el corazón..

Besaré los labio magníficos dulces
Yo me fundiré con usted bajo cada puesta del sol balsámica tropical
He caído en ojos
Yo siempre lo amaré

Téngame esta noche..
Beseme en la luz de la luna
Téngame esta noche
He caído a pies..

Besaré los labio magníficos dulces
Yo me fundiré con usted bajo cada puesta del sol balsámica tropical
He caído en ojos
Yo siempre lo amaré

Téngame esta noche..
Beseme en la luz de la luna
Téngame esta noche
He caído a pies..


(English Version)

I have sailed the seven seas
I feel as though I've climbed the Rockies
I once saw no sun set in the horizon
Sung songs never released from my lips
Now all I aspire
Is to fall into your eyes forever
Sail away with me on this saline ship
I'll forever hold you in my arms

I'll kiss your sweet gorgeous lips
I'll melt with you under every tropical balmy sunset
I've fallen into your eyes
I will always love you...

I touch your soft silky hair
Caressing your soft warm thighs
Your breast close to mine
We will dream away as lovers
With eyes like yours
You always seduce me
I've been searching for true pleasure
Which I have found in your heart...

I'll kiss your sweet gorgeous lips
I'll melt with you under every tropical balmy sunset
I've fallen into your eyes
I will always love you...

Hold me tonight...
This magic moment in the moonlight
Hold me tonight
I've fallen to your feet...

I'll kiss your sweet gorgeous lips
I'll melt with you under every tropical balmy sunset
I've fallen into your eyes
I will always love you...

Hold me tonight...
This magic moment in the moonlight
Hold me tonight
I've fallen to your feet...

I'll kiss your sweet gorgeous lips
I'll melt with you under every tropical balmy sunset
I've fallen into your eyes
I will always love you...



[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-04-2002 10:51 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-03-04 11:11 PM


Noahß Noé dulce, esto es encantador, y así que conmovedor, algún día yo deseo que sea joven otra vez para sentirse como esto. ...you ha pintado su lona en una muestra colorada del amor
completo

I am a little rusty, LOL but I hope you can undersand this.....

Lauren~




Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (03-04-2002 11:12 PM).]

Pilgrimage
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2 posted 2002-03-04 11:28 PM


Dear Noah,
Very pretty.

Nan

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3 posted 2002-03-04 11:32 PM


I like this...fantastic writing...James
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4 posted 2002-03-04 11:37 PM


Neat my friend...very neat...sure glad you gave the english version though or I'd never understood....hee hee..

jwesley

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5 posted 2002-03-05 12:38 PM


Thanks for the translation, though it sounded beautiful in both languages.  Impressive, Noah!
Midnight Writer
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6 posted 2002-03-05 12:40 PM


splendid! Thank you!

"No matter how great you are, you'll never be greater than yourself."

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7 posted 2002-03-05 01:25 AM


Wow spanish is such a romantic language!! THis poem is so dreamy i fell right into it.
loved it
xoxo

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8 posted 2002-03-05 09:00 AM


muy bueno amigo...muy bueno


N orth Carolina Girl
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9 posted 2002-03-05 10:10 AM


Noah,so very beautiful and I`m sure glad you did it in english.

Juanita

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10 posted 2002-03-05 10:28 AM


Beautiful in any language my dear friend

~ Ruth
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11 posted 2002-03-05 10:32 AM



Noah...what a lovely surprise...thank you so much for this seemingly effortless gift...you make it look so simple!

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12 posted 2002-03-05 12:30 PM


Muy bien, mi amigo.
Sandra

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13 posted 2002-03-05 12:59 PM


Muy bueno, amigo mio.  Muy dulce

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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14 posted 2002-03-05 01:49 PM


Where did you learned Spanish? This was romantic in both languages, I love it.
Su romance ha captivado mi corazon.

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15 posted 2002-03-05 02:35 PM


Noah, this is a majestic piece of sonnata poetry.
One of your best, in any language
muy bonita!
tSR

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16 posted 2002-03-05 04:50 PM


HEy Noah, this is awesome. I could just hear the guitar music and  castanets with this lovely poem. floria

Floria

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But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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17 posted 2002-03-05 06:42 PM


Yo te digo, sinceremente, mi amigo...es muy dificil escribir poesia en otros idiomas. A pesar de eso, lo has hecho con mucho exito. Te felicito!

en el valle de los ciegos, el tuerto es rey...un dicho favorito de mi

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18 posted 2002-03-05 07:03 PM


Ella debe ser bastante una chica Noé     Hermoso!

~* Without deep reflection one knows from daily life that one exists for other people ." *~

Einstein

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19 posted 2002-03-06 09:00 AM


My reply has to be in plain ole English... it's my only language other than blonde gibberish. *G*

This is beautiful, M'toe... your tender heart speaks a language all its own - love. *S*

J. K. Mitchell
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20 posted 2002-03-06 09:29 AM


Just when I think you can't get any better...
Martie
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21 posted 2002-03-07 12:10 PM


Noah

Muy especial palabra, mi amigo.

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22 posted 2002-03-07 12:13 PM



Bravo! Your talent shines through in this!  Well done

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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23 posted 2002-03-07 01:36 PM


Noah,

what lovely thoughts you hold in your heart.
beautifully written and translated.

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24 posted 2002-03-07 02:03 PM


Stunningly beautiful...I could feel the music flowing perfectly through it...BRAVO!!!**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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25 posted 2002-03-07 03:49 PM


A very beautifully romantic song Noah, I enjoyed seeing the Spanish, though I was grateful for the English translation!

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26 posted 2002-03-07 03:55 PM


Noah!  This is beautiful sweetie!  How come nearly everyone here at Passions speaks Spanish??!   Thanks for the translation as I wouldn't have been able to understand...although the Spanish is very romantic.  Gosh...you could put it to music so easily as well.  Enjoyed so much!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Sometimes all you really wish for...
     is someone to wish for you.~

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