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The Quarry |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee 
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You are the daze in blue green eyes smiling halfway along the limestone walls of quarried gifts laid bare for all to see where white cotton sheds on rock beds, posing from spontaneity You are the miles I ride with feet dancing in wind Uncaring of angry clouds in bold exposure We are forgiven when love breaks across our faces I would then race to your window freshly made for you Wanting you deeper in this reflection than even I can fathom |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Ah ... this just made me sigh Regina ... beautifully written, lovely phrasing.  Best wishes, /Kit |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
like the composition and suggestions made here, well done  |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Powerfully beautiful, my friend. You write so well. jwesley |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous surreal romantic visions always make me sigh! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Regina, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Reg, Wanting you deeper in this reflection than even I can fathom How could you want more than that? Great write. Don't stop! |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
My eyes are only hazel, but I'll get colored contacts if that will help. LOL Enjoyed much, my friend. *hugs*Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Some very nice lines. Enjoyed your poem much. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Gee Reg, tearing down walls turns you into a real romantic, wonder what a complete house demolition would do to you?  Kidding of course, as it was simply loverly!~* If I made you "feel" anything at all today, that makes me smile *~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
wear my stone colors dive in my dark water swim in my echo places let me wear your woman with my wet hands |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Lovely Reg, good to see your words hon. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...posing from spontaneity... I like that! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
You are the miles I ride with feet dancing in wind ================================ now thats a sigh waiting to happen Not sure what I expected from the title... but I know we aint talking bout Fred Flinstone here  LOLYour pen is sighing so sweetly of late dear poetess...and we get to sigh with it. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I would then race to your window freshly made for you Wanting you deeper in this reflection than even I can fathom Bravo!!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RWood~ Delicately penned~ 'We are forgiven when love breaks across our faces' *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Wonderful writing, Regina...  |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Regina, Exceeltne writing.  Peaches |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
I like your style rwood. nice one. floria Floria |
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