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strbbux
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0 posted 2002-03-04 07:52 PM



It Takes Two

It takes two to have an argument,
You cant argue with just you.
It takes two to make up and say your sorry
To do this it takes two.

It takes two to break a heart apart
And pierce a heart with sorrow.
It takes two to shatter all the dreams
Planned for a new tomorrow.

It takes two to love with feelings deep
When another life is conceived.
It takes two to love this newborn child
This new blessing you've received.

So never blame the other person
When things start to go wrong.
For it takes two to bring up a family
And help the children grow in love strong.

Floria

© Copyright 2002 Floria Kelderhouse - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-04 07:58 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is a wonderful challenge, sweet friend, yes, yes, it requires both a loving man and woman to forever run a family and to love each other forever! (kiss on cheek) This is excellent, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always make me smile! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Floria, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-03-04 09:08 PM


What a sweet poem, and filled with good advice. I didn't catch this challenge, but I like the results.
Sandra

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3 posted 2002-03-04 09:11 PM


Thank you Noah, somehow I knew you would like this. floria  

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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4 posted 2002-03-04 09:12 PM


Sandra I guess it is an old one from the archives that someone pulled out. thanks. there are some other good ones on here. floria  

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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5 posted 2002-03-04 09:24 PM


Floria - such truthful and wise words. Enjoyed this. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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6 posted 2002-03-04 09:31 PM


Thanks Chris, for replying floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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7 posted 2002-03-04 09:54 PM


You have penned truth in this piece Floria..and done so beautifully
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