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All I see |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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All I see are the patterns the words make as they spill across the page in colours of childhood innocence But you drip droplets of black or blue lifeblood emotion passion Sometimes my world is cold bland washed out as you paint your life in colours of loving vibrancy giving pleading with me to see to feel to hear to smell the world and life Your life penned in full view filled with everything I desire yet all I see are the patterns the words make as they spill. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Good use of words here Keth....A pretty clear message to me...Nicely done.. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) This is sooooooo beautifully bittersweet, sweet friend, I believe we all have these feelings sometimes! (kiss on cheek) May these thoughts of black and blue be converted into thoughts of true joy forever, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kethry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light alway sshine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Keth darling sister of my heart and holder of my souls sighs, oh my stars, sometimes there is magic written on these pages, sometimes there are sparkling jewels that flash in the light that twinkles here. Then there are those rare occasions when truths are revealed. Why is it that so often truth and beauty are revealed in your writing? I suppose it is that which makes it perfect. Sadness can still be beautiful, and this is and incredibly true This is utterly utterly stunning, and why it hadn’t more replies I can’t say unless it’s because these pages move so fast. Never mind that is what I’m for to raise the fallen high once again   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Keth, Well done I empathize. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wow!! This is an awesome write. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"But you drip droplets of black or blue lifeblood emotion passion" Kethry~ this is fantastic!!! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
yet all I see are the patterns the words make as they spill. So beautifully written, Keth...absolutely perfect. It was wonderful to hear your voice this afternoon. copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Keth, this is lovely, and ditto on what Lyra hilighted those were my favorite lines also. great work. floria Floria |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Kethry,another winner my dear friend. Love, Juanita |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Sometimes my world is cold bland washed out as you paint your life in colours of loving vibrancy I love this, Kethry... It touches me on so many different levels... including pure jealousy at your own descriptive powers. *S* Well done!! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Excellent !!!! |
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