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1slick_lady
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0 posted 2002-03-04 01:27 PM



Gentle Spirit’s Riddle Challenge

I am somewhere
that I am not
and sometimes grieve
my passing lot
you can wait impatiently
just for me
but I am something
you can not see
and you only miss me
when I am missed
who am I
riddle me
riddle me
riddle me this ?

"Pour yourself thick, when it is you, that you spread."

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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1 posted 2002-03-04 04:13 PM


Don't know ...it sounds like a bus.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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2 posted 2002-03-04 04:54 PM


not sure, just guessing but is it ones self?
Thanks for picking up the challenge.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

1slick_lady
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3 posted 2002-03-04 04:59 PM


keth...no not a bus

gentle...and your welcome...and not ones self

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (03-04-2002 05:00 PM).]

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4 posted 2002-03-04 06:16 PM




(giggles in delight) Awwwwwww, I think I'm way off but is it a fairy? (smiles) This is  a wonderful delightful riddle, sweet friend, we all love you so much, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2002-03-04 07:59 PM


Is it a loved one passed on? good one and hard to figure out. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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6 posted 2002-03-04 09:21 PM


a death of a loved one?

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

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7 posted 2002-03-04 09:26 PM


Could you possibly be a birthday? This is a good one! Chris

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8 posted 2002-03-05 11:36 AM



Time...

1slick_lady
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9 posted 2002-03-06 05:17 PM


head of the class...it is time...helen
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